Some young people look forward to a year of travelling ,a gap year,before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to broaden their horizons.For others this is an expensive waste of time .Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The view, a year of traveling after teenagers finish high school, has been became more and more popular in the world, especially among developed countries. It's seem to be useful way for young people preparing for future and thinking about their future life.
Experts say that gap year is a chance to whom want to experience a completely independent life for first time, thinking about if necessary to continue their study or it's better to find a suitable job? For this reason traveling is a good solution both answer their question and enjoy their life. Generally speaking traveling make human a mature person, by improving human knowledge about own and the world that surrounded them. All of these help to recognize your favorites better and help to make right decision in the future. Also during a journey tolerance of human goes up and it good enough to accept your life duties best and bear hard situations.
On the other hand some people argue that such journeys covered huge cost. Since gappers pay their travel cost, they might go back home without any money for rest of life. So, they say going such journey basically is wrong. This view is true somehow. For all I think governments should pay part of costs in order to encourage people to do that, also organize these travels to be cheaper due to decrease disadvantages of it. In my view, if it is possible, this way is the big chance for the majority of gappers to know themselves.
Over all, although gap year has some disadvantages like it's expensive costs, it could be a good solution for whom want to feel a independent life if governments try to plan such trips.
- Some young people look forward to a year of travelling a gap year before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to broaden their horizons For others this is an expensive waste of time Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of work and schools should make all teenagers spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects To what extent do you agree 93
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'i think', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221153846154 0.247107183377 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.169871794872 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.112179487179 0.0946595960268 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0448717948718 0.0501214627716 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0641025641026 0.0437548338989 147% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.11858974359 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0320512820513 0.0403226058552 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47508243456 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0480769230769 0.0326793684256 147% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0929487179487 0.0861772015684 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00961538461538 0.021408717616 45% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00961538461538 0.011925033212 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1637.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 286.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72377622378 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.29020979021 0.374742101984 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.202797202797 0.28420135186 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157342657343 0.203846283523 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104895104895 0.137316102897 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47508243456 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594405594406 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 64.2833606918 60.7387585426 106% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4285714286 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.322735174 49.517814964 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.928571429 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 40.7082917083 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.33333333333 1.69124875643 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362751628345 0.332605444948 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0891359858621 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0639142104569 0.0668466124924 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.487016558746 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.187286534277 0.148594505496 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128560710127 0.134430193775 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587601151181 0.0742795772207 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.266647137768 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0442369070335 0.0638462369009 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221889448266 0.228012699653 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603624530837 0.058150111329 104% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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