Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The author of the issue contends that there are some people who may hold the view that the government should allocate some funding to the arts in order to ensure that the arts can thrive and be available to all people. On the other hand, there are some other people who take the opposite viewpoint and believe that the integrity of the arts is threatened by government funding of the art. In what follows, the main reasons posited by both groups are first discussed and then my own position will be delineated.
Those people who argue that governments funding of the arts is crucial for thriving the arts and making the arts accessible to all people, seem to have one plausible reasons for their position. The reason is that the government should devote some fund to the schools and universities, so that they can present several free art courses with high level standards. Besides, they should provide students an opportunity to have access to art instruments and facilities. In fact, in this way children will be encouraged to learn about arts. Therefore, arts can be available to people who do not enough money, so more people can thrive their talents in arts. As a result, art can flourish better.
As was stated already, there are some others who believe that the governments funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts. These people seem to have one chief reason to support their idea. In their opinion, if the government allocate some funding to the arts, they will certainly interfere with the subjects of the arts. In other words, they do not allow the artist to perform what they want or they like. Indeed, they will indirectly affects the artists' works. Consequently, the arts will be deteriorate and will lose its integrity.
I should say that it is the first attitude with which I fundamentally concur. Among countless reasons which can support my opinion, I will delve into the most conspicuous ones. First of all, from my point of view, the reasons on which the first group relies are sensible and logical. Furthermore, I have one more reason which makes me believe that governments should allocate some money to support the artists. That is, the artist should be paid money from the government and government should provide them lucrative jobs. In this way more people will be encouraged to do artistic work and become an artist.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 448, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...they like. Indeed, they will indirectly affects the artists works. Consequently, the ar...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'in fact', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'in other words', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21881390593 0.240241500013 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.175869120654 0.157235817809 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0572597137014 0.0880659088768 65% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0347648261759 0.0497285424764 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0572597137014 0.0444667217837 129% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102249488753 0.12292977631 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0306748466258 0.0406280797675 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.49479296139 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0327198364008 0.030933414821 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.118609406953 0.0997080785238 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0470347648262 0.0249443105267 189% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0265848670757 0.0148568991511 179% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2608.0 2732.02544248 95% => OK
No of words: 445.0 452.878318584 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8606741573 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323595505618 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.240449438202 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155056179775 0.200843997647 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101123595506 0.132149295362 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49479296139 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449438202247 0.48968727796 92% => OK
Word variations: 49.4836946931 55.4138127331 89% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.347826087 23.380412469 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.896423889 59.4972553346 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.391304348 141.124799967 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.347826087 23.380412469 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.608695652174 0.674092028746 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 43.3927699072 51.4728631049 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.31297709924 1.64882698954 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.695674419005 0.391690518653 178% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134864381801 0.123202303941 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.093979476946 0.077325440228 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.520891047152 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183799481546 0.149214159877 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.243474816835 0.161403998019 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.199136107611 0.0892212321368 223% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.413921467385 0.385218514788 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.126754972925 0.0692045440612 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.463478892366 0.275328986314 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205165773725 0.0653680567796 314% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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