Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere . To what extend do you agree with this view.
Nowadays, government is spending more money for arts as compared to olden days. While someone believes that such money could spend for some other purpose, however, in my opinion, although government disburse money to elsewhere, I believe that to pay out money for arts also important for our community to health and well being, education and economy.
Regards to health and well being, arts are more beneficial to the society to relax from their stressful lifestyle. In addition, arts are helped in the community to socialize every one by visiting art gallery and also enrich people's emotional world then teaches compassion. Furthermore, arts can make a positive impact on specific health condition such as dementia, depression, and parkinsonism. Therefore, a good government expect a subjective well being in their community; they should spend money for arts.
On the other hand, government is nothing without education and economy. The value of spending money for arts is much better for future generation with good value of education. Students who came from arts back ground during their school life, they are three times more likely to get a degree as well as a volunteer in the community. Moreover, economy is the spine of government, though spending money for arts might increase the nations overall economic standards through import and export arts materials namely, clay moulding, paintings so on. Expenditure of arts will not make any degradation of nation's economy, thus, government may divide money for arts too.
In conclusion, other than arts government distribute, money somewhere else also certainly benefits for authority and community. Nevertheless, expend of arts are not wasting money.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.320261437908 0.247107183377 130% => OK
Verbs: 0.107843137255 0.155533422707 69% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0718954248366 0.0946595960268 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0816993464052 0.0501214627716 163% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0261437908497 0.0437548338989 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133986928105 0.122226691241 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0294117647059 0.0403226058552 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73977442964 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0294117647059 0.0326793684256 90% => OK
Particles: 0.00326797385621 0.00163938923432 199% => OK
Determiners: 0.0490196078431 0.0861772015684 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0196078431373 0.021408717616 92% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00326797385621 0.011925033212 27% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1745.0 1933.35771543 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 316.048096192 85% => OK
Chars per words: 6.48698884758 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.39405204461 0.374742101984 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.308550185874 0.28420135186 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.24907063197 0.203846283523 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.174721189591 0.137316102897 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73977442964 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 63.0033755116 60.7387585426 104% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6923076923 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4125757099 49.517814964 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.230769231 127.492653851 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 0.814263465372 189% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 51.5473262797 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 2.24242424242 1.69124875643 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318018406694 0.332605444948 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.099526882136 0.102741220458 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0782131303637 0.0668466124924 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.563691607047 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153208753506 0.148594505496 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134009571835 0.134430193775 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549191545121 0.0742795772207 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.331255020771 0.324371583561 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0277719743648 0.0638462369009 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212751910725 0.228012699653 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494452246114 0.058150111329 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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