Some item can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer?
In today's hectic world, a new technology has penetrated every single facet of our lives. Day in day out without which we cannot even imagine our lives. In fact, technology is an inseparable part of every society. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether items made by machine is better or made by hand. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that with the development of technology and advent of modern machines, people can take the advantages of products made by those machines. In the following paragraph I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that there are significant factors in which are paramount for vast majorities of people such as high quality or price and so forth. Scientifically speaking, regardless of made by hand or machine many people are more likely to opt for items, which not only are provided with best quality but also are in lower price. As a matter of fact, stuff like clothes or furniture's made by hand took much time to be made and although maybe these kind of items provided with high quality, due to the precious time they took to be prepared they should be in high cost. For example in order to make a sofa it take more time to be made rather than made by machine and definitely less quality. Delving further into the issue reveal that in this way, hardly ever people choose for items made by hand because crowds of people are on the belief that companies with modern machines offer more extended warranties compare to stuff made by hand. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country; show that vast majorities of people like to purchase items which made by machine because they are provided with high quality and can be bought with much less price in various shape and size.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that items made by machine are more likely to keep the planet green. Broadly speaking, modern machines design in a way, which provide fertile ground for materials to be recycled. To put it in other word, stuff made by hand will probably have numerous waste materials that can be harmful not only for earth but also for health of people. Indeed, nowadays standardization is one of the paramount items which whole producer all around the globe should have to respect. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, in some case machine does not work in a way that hand work, for instance, special items like carpet made by hand are in a high quality than carpet made by machine due to the materials used in the tissue of carpet. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, in all around the world various items made by hand or in some case by machine. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that items produced with machine will definitely be in a high quality, which is important aspect among different factors like price and so forth. Additionally, products made by machine are more likely to save the planet due to modern system that allows machine to recycle waste items.
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... allows machine to recycle waste items.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24358974359 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.161858974359 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0897435897436 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0689102564103 0.046263068375 149% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0240384615385 0.0685040099705 35% => OK
Prepositions: 0.160256410256 0.118717715034 135% => OK
Participles: 0.0608974358974 0.0351676179071 173% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60406197168 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0336538461538 0.0309702414327 109% => OK
Particles: 0.00160256410256 0.00188951952338 85% => OK
Determiners: 0.0721153846154 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0160256410256 0.0209618222197 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0192307692308 0.0139019557991 138% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3335.0 2387.08602151 140% => OK
No of words: 575.0 408.028673835 141% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89685180668 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337391304348 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231304347826 0.251872472559 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153043478261 0.174417080927 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0939130434783 0.112833075102 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60406197168 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446956521739 0.524397521467 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.2547360599 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 26.1363636364 20.5533526081 127% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.8815169521 48.84282405 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.590909091 120.699889404 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1363636364 20.5533526081 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.644075263715 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 49.266798419 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.82389937107 1.45489161554 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268057878029 0.300154397459 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116513320547 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0679462121194 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.48734201835 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142958495381 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106841836091 0.114077575197 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865673667674 0.0781384742642 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.490363270719 0.336927656856 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.071725801074 0.067059652881 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213789941257 0.210909579961 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392589387894 0.0618886996521 63% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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