People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
The Issue Says that Some people make decisions on basis of the emotion,Because some people have a many emotional felling are generating in show the some people condition and it's living.I disagree in this issue because the some people have miss use our feeling and emotion.
Firstly,In this issue We can show the some people have more poor and it's condition very bad,But in realities says that it's not poor only that can show our self poor because people have get money.This people have use this money for enjoying our self without any work doing.
Secondly,This type of people have not work and only show the it's self like poor.For Example In Highway or road signal Many handicap people are go to the cars and bike for money and it's showing the very poor and handicap so people get the money for this.In realities it is not a handicap but it showing our self like handicap so people have get the money and it is enjoy our self without any work.
Thirdly,Some poor people have extremely poor and get money for the living but it get the money without any work doing it's going every where and for showing our self it is poor and get some money for living to some emotional people take a money for living but this type of people have use this money for enjoying our bad habits.
Fourthly,Poor people have not work so he think we can get money very easy without any work only showing our self very badly represented to some people so people have money for living easily. People do not thing this type of people do not get the working in some home so it is gaining the money for it's work.This type of people do not have any work in any condition it is only thing the how to get money easily?
Therefore,I conclude that some people have very emotional for take money for some people for living our self it is not show the it poor so why it not working and why any some job not doing for money.but only he take the money for showing our self very rich.
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Suggestion: , Because
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
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...onal felling are generating in show the some people condition and its living.I disag...
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...he some people condition and its living.I disagree in this issue because the some...
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
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Suggestion: This
...self poor because people have get money.This people have use this money for enjoying...
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...self poor because people have get money.This people have use this money for enjoying...
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Suggestion: , This
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Suggestion: got; gotten
...g our self like handicap so people have get the money and it is enjoy our self with...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enjoyed'.
Suggestion: enjoyed
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Suggestion: , Some
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Message: Did you mean 'gets'?
Suggestion: gets
...oor and get money for the living but it get the money without any work doing its go...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: IT_IS[19]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...it get the money without any work doing its going every where and for showing our s...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
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Suggestion: everywhere
... money without any work doing its going every where and for showing our self it is poor and...
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Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
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Suggestion: , Poor
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Suggestion: thinks
...ourthly,Poor people have not work so he think we can get money very easy without any ...
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Suggestion: This
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Suggestion: , I
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'thirdly', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247395833333 0.240241500013 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.174479166667 0.157235817809 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0598958333333 0.0880659088768 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0885416666667 0.0497285424764 178% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0833333333333 0.0444667217837 187% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.111979166667 0.12292977631 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0520833333333 0.0406280797675 128% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.13714100806 2.79330140395 77% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0104166666667 0.030933414821 34% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.125 0.0997080785238 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0078125 0.0249443105267 31% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0104166666667 0.0148568991511 70% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1955.0 2732.02544248 72% => OK
No of words: 363.0 452.878318584 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38567493113 6.0361032391 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.231404958678 0.366273622748 63% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.151515151515 0.280924506359 54% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0881542699725 0.200843997647 44% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0578512396694 0.132149295362 44% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.13714100806 2.79330140395 77% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 219.290929204 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.292011019284 0.48968727796 60% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 31.0791241677 55.4138127331 56% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6194690265 34% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 51.8571428571 23.380412469 222% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 63.281038202 59.4972553346 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 279.285714286 141.124799967 198% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.8571428571 23.380412469 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 0.674092028746 212% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.21349557522 537% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 67.0086580087 51.4728631049 130% => OK
Elegance: 1.18796992481 1.64882698954 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129233272978 0.391690518653 33% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.405660412783 0.123202303941 329% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0664143496601 0.077325440228 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.942085676055 0.547984918172 172% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0986859406184 0.149214159877 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901689606011 0.161403998019 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047150300362 0.0892212321368 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.487995066349 0.385218514788 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0442994379745 0.0692045440612 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097484707989 0.275328986314 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463375029784 0.0653680567796 71% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 13.5995575221 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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