Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
While it comes to the issue that you prefer to save money or enjoy it, optimists believe that they more need to spend money instead of saving it. However, pessimists have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reason.
First and the most important reason is that the main aim of life is not money. Nowadays, most people hard work all day long, and it makes them to usually feel boring because they do not allocate enough time and money for recreation. Although they usually claim that saving money allow them to cope with unforeseen problems in the future, I should say that we live in now and future is unpredictable. I think that a small example can give some light on this topic. Imagine a person saves a great amount of his salary. In a rainy day, when he comes back from his office, he dies because of an accident. Do you think he comprehended the life?
A further subtle point we must consider is that saving money have numerous negative consequences on people life. From the economical angle, you should be aware of this point that money must be circulated in the economic cycle, and saving it affects the economic condition negatively. Therefore, governments legislate law for giving more taxes of bank accounts in order to encourage people to participate in commercial activities. I think that there is not a better example that myself when I was studying in the university. At that time, I had to work in cafeteria, which was near my home for paying the university tuition fees. I did not receive more money as my salary, and saving it never could change my conditions. In this way, I took a decision to establish a small electronic firm with some of my friends. In the following years, we expanded firm and even hired some people. Overall, the biggest advantage of circulating money in economic cycle lies in the fact that assists businessmen to use this budget for production, which brings more job opportunities.
All above evidence supports the undeniable fact that spending money in economic activities causes we more enjoy our life, and boost the economic condition. Of course, as an English proverb goes “coin has two sides,” those who take the opposite view are partly reasonable that we may face some unforeseen predicaments in the future that we need money for solve it. Nonetheless, I think that its benefits outweigh dangers. Last but not least, let us hope people gain the deeper insight of life, and detect that we do not live for money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'i think', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.205588822355 0.229887763892 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.175648702595 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0938123752495 0.0866891130778 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0439121756487 0.046263068375 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0898203592814 0.0685040099705 131% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.125748502994 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0239520958084 0.0351676179071 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61355950996 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0199600798403 0.0309702414327 64% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0898203592814 0.0887237588012 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0139720558882 0.0209618222197 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00998003992016 0.0139019557991 72% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2574.0 2387.08602151 108% => OK
No of words: 447.0 408.028673835 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75838926174 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308724832215 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221476510067 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158836689038 0.174417080927 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0984340044743 0.112833075102 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61355950996 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55033557047 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 65.3606935121 59.2087087015 110% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 18.625 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8705063294 48.84282405 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 120.699889404 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.458333333333 0.644075263715 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 40.7726510067 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.14838709677 1.45489161554 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327424233235 0.300154397459 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0944033816511 0.103427244359 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0675915800352 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.416310318309 0.497263757937 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138812989617 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101116343427 0.114077575197 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782499251879 0.0781384742642 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.362580368529 0.336927656856 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.07810056786 0.067059652881 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238205670905 0.210909579961 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599154679634 0.0618886996521 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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