Beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that the internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is no even a shadow of doubt internet has changed our life to a great extent. However, some opponents think that internet creates vast problems. This essay will discuss both sides of opinions before reaching at any conclusion.
On the one hand, internet has become a great need in this modern era because, without it no one can imagine his or her life. It is fruitful each and every field although, it be a medical, engineering, banking. It uses everywhere. Moreover, it makes our life more easy. First of all, it helps to widened our mental horizon and students can also get any kind of information regard their study. Not only people, it also assist to develop any country. In addition, we can know about everything at any time. People can also get information about weather forecasting. And, tourists can also get information about any place and they can measure distance through internet. However, it has changed our life completely
However, some people think that it has many drawbacks. First of all, human being has become addictive of internet, he or she has no time for other family members. Apart from this, people cheat with others through social networking websites because they hack the Id of innocent people and convert their private data into public. Moreover, children also surf the porn websites which also affect their mind in bad way. Last but not least, when children spend their whole time to surf the internet it ruins their posetur and they become weaker physically.
In conclusion, I deem that internet has many drawbacks but we can not overlooked its advantages. If people will use Internet in a limit and appropriate way then we can alter its drawbacks into its advantages.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'apart from', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'first of all', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231707317073 0.247107183377 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.140243902439 0.155533422707 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0701219512195 0.0946595960268 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0701219512195 0.0501214627716 140% => OK
Pronouns: 0.100609756098 0.0437548338989 230% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.100609756098 0.122226691241 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0182926829268 0.0403226058552 45% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.51634608547 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0121951219512 0.0326793684256 37% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0823170731707 0.0861772015684 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.030487804878 0.021408717616 142% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00609756097561 0.011925033212 51% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1744.0 1933.35771543 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 316.048096192 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01379310345 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.324137931034 0.374742101984 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251724137931 0.28420135186 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18275862069 0.203846283523 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0965517241379 0.137316102897 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51634608547 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589655172414 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 63.6533150466 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.2631578947 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5954058404 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7894736842 127.492653851 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.789473684211 0.814263465372 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.99599198397 225% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.4355716878 49.1944974215 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.12745098039 1.69124875643 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206269657164 0.332605444948 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121440544242 0.102741220458 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108552515114 0.0668466124924 162% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.44137063308 0.534860350844 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14320180849 0.148594505496 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678343001868 0.134430193775 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542028494976 0.0742795772207 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.195350241645 0.324371583561 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0545284460906 0.0638462369009 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147085787564 0.228012699653 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569703450727 0.058150111329 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.