Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
When it comes to the issue the importance of preservation endangered species, some people believe that we have an obligation to protect not only endangered species, but also whole creatures. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account of the following reasons.
A further point we must consider is that human have an ethical duty to protect on the nature, because they are reprehensible in animals’ extinction. Some people say that several extinctions were happened in the history of the Earth, so it is a common process and we should not be involved in this matter. However, they ignore that the scenario is different in the recent age. After industrial revolution, human activities had increased so tremendously that nature is not able to restore itself. Ozone depletion, air and water pollution, soil erosion, and even deforestation are a small part of human’s effective on the nature and species. From the moral angle, human have to preserve the nature and species in order to compensate their past mistakes.
All above evidence supports this undeniable that we should protect other species because our survival depends on them, and also it is a moral responsible. Of course, as an English proverbs goes “a coin has two sides”; therefore, those who have the opposite view partially reasonable that this project surely is expensive. Nevertheless, I think that its profits outweigh dangerous.
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- The automobile is destroying our quality of life Agree or disagree 68
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- Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 76
- Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 70
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'i think', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223776223776 0.240241500013 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.132867132867 0.157235817809 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.115384615385 0.0880659088768 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0559440559441 0.0497285424764 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0594405594406 0.0444667217837 134% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.104895104895 0.12292977631 85% => OK
Participles: 0.013986013986 0.0406280797675 34% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.92422088039 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.020979020979 0.030933414821 68% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.104895104895 0.0997080785238 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0104895104895 0.0249443105267 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00699300699301 0.0148568991511 47% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1510.0 2732.02544248 55% => OK
No of words: 243.0 452.878318584 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.21399176955 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.58838876751 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.390946502058 0.366273622748 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.329218106996 0.280924506359 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.222222222222 0.200843997647 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139917695473 0.132149295362 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92422088039 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 219.290929204 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.48968727796 129% => OK
Word variations: 67.9325854079 55.4138127331 123% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6194690265 63% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6923076923 23.380412469 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7240908122 59.4972553346 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.153846154 141.124799967 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 23.380412469 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.692307692308 0.674092028746 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.94800884956 61% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 51.6141183919 51.4728631049 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.38028169014 1.64882698954 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352580737836 0.391690518653 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0800362796689 0.123202303941 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0539186714355 0.077325440228 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.489714102743 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114151165196 0.149214159877 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131515165545 0.161403998019 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733893884465 0.0892212321368 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.289233702828 0.385218514788 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0370996281277 0.0692045440612 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247183746342 0.275328986314 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785590097398 0.0653680567796 120% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.