Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods.
To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
It is suggested by many people that each and every country should make increasing production of goods and materials their absolute first priority. In my opinion, this is only a meritorious strategy to a certain extent.
To begin with, there are several instrumental benefits from promoting production that cannot be overlooked. Firstly, it increases domestic consumption as people will have more access to products as they are now more available. Secondly, such focus also provides resources for external trading with other more profitable markets. I believe that these two factors catalyze the development of the national economy and that this will constitute a solid platform for other developments in other fields.
However, from my point of view, there are other aspects of a society that should be given the same amount of attention. Economic growth is not sustainable unless political stability is achieved. In order to attain it, vital services such as education and healthcare must be made more accessible and practical activities to preserve culture should be conducted with greater consideration as they meet with the most basic needs of the population. In addition, ever-increasing production may not always be beneficial because there is a saturation point at which the consumers cannot afford to buy more goods from the suppliers. Such imbalanced relationship might possibly yield global economic crisis and nation inflation, just to name a few.
In conclusion, while the importance of material production is paramount, it is far from being the sole focal point for countries around the world.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'while', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216606498195 0.247107183377 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.140794223827 0.155533422707 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.14440433213 0.0946595960268 153% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0649819494585 0.0501214627716 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0361010830325 0.0437548338989 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129963898917 0.122226691241 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0324909747292 0.0403226058552 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9320429375 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0252707581227 0.0326793684256 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0758122743682 0.0861772015684 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0361010830325 0.021408717616 169% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0108303249097 0.011925033212 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1631.0 1933.35771543 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 316.048096192 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.47222222222 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.396825396825 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.321428571429 0.28420135186 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.265873015873 0.203846283523 130% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.186507936508 0.137316102897 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9320429375 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.037074148 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.56093040696 115% => OK
Word variations: 71.9287515758 60.7387585426 118% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7675941989 49.517814964 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.916666667 127.492653851 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.814263465372 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 53.1428571429 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.5671641791 1.69124875643 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338562327268 0.332605444948 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0606781267635 0.102741220458 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.063706686924 0.0668466124924 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.508903107271 0.534860350844 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.197177852251 0.148594505496 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125513555319 0.134430193775 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716675378546 0.0742795772207 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.228897016118 0.324371583561 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.078840699751 0.0638462369009 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220959949708 0.228012699653 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751419231462 0.058150111329 129% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.