The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

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The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart and line graph, in the given order, illustrate the average rainfall and temperature for each month in one region of East Africa.

In general, aside for minor differences, it is clear that both average monthly precipitation and temperature vary in a relatively similar pattern.

While the monthly amount of rainfall fluctuates from January to March before peaking at 275 millimeters in April, the corresponding figures for temperature rise stably from January to 23.75 C in March before dropping to 23.5 C in April. From May to October, there is a correlation between the...

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The bar chart and line graph, in the giv...
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Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: IN_JANUARY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'on July'? This seems to be a day date.
Suggestion: on July
... with both reaching their lowest points in July 10 millimeters for rainfall and 20.5 Ce...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 634, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
....5 C in October to 21.75 C in December.
^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'may', 'whereas', 'while', 'in general']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.335365853659 0.268076937826 125% => OK
Verbs: 0.0609756097561 0.116061578633 53% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0670731707317 0.0759168565197 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0243902439024 0.0366838410393 66% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0121951219512 0.0131127313244 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.19512195122 0.155750635184 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0243902439024 0.0379272487307 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00085913624 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0365853658537 0.0210936926555 173% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0853658536585 0.0948980150116 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 943.0 1161.00487805 81% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.9 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.28666666667 5.90752243213 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4 0.337110787985 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.306666666667 0.247514529752 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206666666667 0.171178102325 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133333333333 0.112407865282 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00085913624 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606666666667 0.546246751206 111% => OK
Word variations: 52.7010830771 49.3433353143 107% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 8.93414634146 56% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0094962315 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3569498064 42.9750493124 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.6 135.714022679 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 23.0094962315 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 0.689975730869 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.48048780488 203% => OK
Readability: 60.6666666667 47.7609492067 127% => OK
Elegance: 5.6875 2.94281807926 193% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32510782365 0.418131533498 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.157551986461 0.181151798455 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0449796826741 0.0850326197045 53% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.837347769368 0.706616315825 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148189922759 0.157042692854 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226260361469 0.228904883108 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153432830228 0.108899403657 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.207013878457 0.367819155151 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0150411943814 0.0812612215331 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28639922229 0.316326947829 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175477078954 0.0921553760075 190% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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