Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
There has been heated debate over the issue of whether educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past. While there are good arguments for both positions, the following discussion will explain in detail why I disagree.
First of all, childeren rather can learn more from comunicatig with frieds through cell phone, online games, and social networking web site. Fore example, they can develp their untapped talents when they communicate or play with colleuges. Modern-day children live hectic lives, becuase today’s globalized society is increasingly competitive and constantly changing. Consequently, it is difficult for children to discover personal interest and pursue the fields of study that they prefer. This makes it crucial for them to tap into their full potential by communicating with friends and to discover thier interest using communicate channels like cell phone or social network. Therefore, it is a good thing for childeren to spend time on cell phone, online games, and social networking web site. According to a group of education experts at Columbia University, people who spend more time on communicate with others than average develp their potential faster than those who do not. The majority of surveyed education experts argued that people whill be likely to become less successful to find what they want if they do not communite or play with others, especially when they are in their developing stages.
Secondly, it becomes even more easier task today to educate children who spend on time on cell phone, online games, and social networking web stie. This is attributed to the fact that, they can learn lessons on morality and ethics through communicating with others. Children who are still mentally immature have a long way to go before they become grown-ups. During this long journey, they ten to make many mistakes on communicate with others, and therfore are prone to misbehave. However, they can bell well guided by interacting with others, who can teach them about etiquette and social norms, and can thus become good models for society. In this respect, it is a more easier task to educate childeren who spend time on interact and communicat with others. For example, some childeren may give in to the temptation of lebeling some online becuase they are too young to judge right from wrong. This is why interacting with other through playing or communicate with others and learning moral ethics is urgent need. With the guidance of others who communicate with children and teach them etiquette, children can learn how to avoid such temptation and become law-abiding citizen. Through such leasons, they can become holistic beings.
In a nutshell, my discussion above presents two strong arguments for positive education effects of children’s spending time on communication with others which I believe effectively convice the reader.
- When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects. 83
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site. 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
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Message: Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244230769231 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.159615384615 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.1 0.0866891130778 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0442307692308 0.046263068375 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0538461538462 0.0685040099705 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130769230769 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0307692307692 0.0351676179071 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69324768137 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0307692307692 0.0309702414327 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0480769230769 0.0887237588012 54% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0192307692308 0.0209618222197 92% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0269230769231 0.0139019557991 194% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2913.0 2387.08602151 122% => OK
No of words: 465.0 408.028673835 114% => OK
Chars per words: 6.26451612903 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4 0.338922669872 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.288172043011 0.251872472559 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21935483871 0.174417080927 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135483870968 0.112833075102 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69324768137 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50752688172 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 58.6415892834 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1428571429 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1309215959 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.714285714 120.699889404 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.761904761905 0.644075263715 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 50.9600614439 45.7405998639 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.57462686567 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415383678831 0.300154397459 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0900339937507 0.103427244359 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0676993423504 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.470610984885 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169075706194 0.151897553556 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148961795431 0.114077575197 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950826562085 0.0781384742642 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.273693412012 0.336927656856 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.192213014224 0.067059652881 287% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265090114698 0.210909579961 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885686430661 0.0618886996521 143% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.