Tpo 40
The reading and the lecture discuss the possibility of permanent human settlement on Venus. The passage claims that Venus condition does not have the vital properties for human permanent settlement. However, the lecture brings up three reasons to refute ideas presented and asserted that living on Venus is not without challenge but it doesn't mean that is impossible. The space station should be built like a balloon rather than standing on the surface. In other words, the condition is suitable for the human hospital on a higher level of atmosphere.
First of all, the writer holds the view that the Venus atmospheric pressure is too high. Therefore, this pressure has the enough power to crush space station on the surface in a short time. In contrast, the speaker rebuts this idea and underlines the fact that atmosphere presser is not the same in all layer of the atmosphere. Accordingly, the pressure decreases gradually as the distance from the surface of Venus increase. Therefore, this problem will be solved, if the station will be made on 50 km distance from the surface of Venus.
Second of all, the author contends that lack of available source water and oxygen is another problem in Venus. However, the lecturer contradicts this contention and states that the Venus atmosphere has the demanded components to made make water and oxygen, In fact, humans can make water and oxygen by means of chemical prosses, since the crucial components are available there. Therefore, they will not need to bring water from the Earth
Finally, the passage states that human will face difficulties for the electricities of their machine and equipment since there is not efficient sunlight to use sun cell for producing electricity. Indeed, a thin layer of clouds reduces the amount of sun that reach the surface, since they cause sunlight reflection to space. On the contrary, the speaker refutes this statement and stresses that the clouds’ thickness is smaller at the higher level. Moreover, humans can use the reflect sun lights to produce electricity. They will have efficient sunlight to make electricity for their machines, if they collect reflected and directed sunlight.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...n Venus is not without challenge but it doesnt mean that is impossible. The space stat...
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Line 6, column 479, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... higher level. Moreover, humans can use the reflect sun lights to produce electricity. They...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'in contrast', 'in fact', 'first of all', 'in other words', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.282828282828 0.261695866417 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.143939393939 0.158904122519 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0707070707071 0.0723426182421 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0429292929293 0.0435111971325 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0176767676768 0.0277247811725 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131313131313 0.128828473217 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0277777777778 0.0370669169778 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65689951085 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.020202020202 0.0208969081088 97% => OK
Particles: 0.00252525252525 0.00154638098197 163% => OK
Determiners: 0.128787878788 0.128158765124 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.020202020202 0.0158828679856 127% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00505050505051 0.0114777025283 44% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2186.0 1645.83664459 133% => OK
No of words: 356.0 271.125827815 131% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1404494382 6.08160592843 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.04852973271 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.38202247191 0.374372842146 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.294943820225 0.287516216867 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205056179775 0.187439937562 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137640449438 0.113142543107 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65689951085 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511235955056 0.539623497131 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.3282277107 53.8517498576 101% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0529801325 130% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9411764706 21.7502111507 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6635681511 49.3711431718 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.588235294 132.220823453 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 21.7502111507 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.882352941176 0.878197800319 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.39072847682 59% => OK
Readability: 50.4355584931 50.5018328374 100% => OK
Elegance: 2.16049382716 1.90840788429 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.682294611178 0.549887131256 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150741601479 0.142949733639 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0828425810313 0.0787303798458 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.598223346575 0.631733273073 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11626019665 0.139662658121 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.321745425924 0.266732575781 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939966040634 0.103435571967 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.471719863288 0.414875509568 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0733008466433 0.0530846634433 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.515074203034 0.40443939384 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492374484008 0.0528353158467 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Less content wanted. Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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