Many people choose to live alone. What do you think the advantages of living alone are and do they outweigh the disadvantages?
Many people tend to live by themselves for several reasons, but the prominent reasons are the independent and freedom. Despite those advantages of living alone, disadvantages of living alone can be the responsibility for having freedom and the financial burdens. In my perspective, the worth of responsibility for those freedoms and independence is weighing more than that of benefits, because the consequences from those freedom and independent can have fatal damages.
There are various purposes for people to live by themselves but among those, the primary purpose would be the independent. People are responsible financially and individually. People can be independent from young age by moved out of their houses to pursue their dreams. Also, since people have to pay for their own living expenses, they are becoming independent.
Another reason for people to live alone is the freedom. Since people are free from parents' nagging, scolding and interrupting with their decisions, they can enjoy their own lifestyles. They can get home late or they can stay up all night without family's interventions. Therefore, it is other reason for people to live by themselves, to seek for freedom.
Nevertheless, there are always dark side for every phenomenon. Likewise, the dark side for this issue is the responsibility. People have to make their own decisions and the consequences on that decisions have to be responsible. Sometimes, they can make wrong decisions due to inexperience and immaturity, and which can be phenomenal impact on their lifestyles. For instance, people believe their driving skills are better off after drink and by showing off some skills can lead to fatal damages. From this people have to be responsible for their damage and in the worst case, it can cost other people's lives.
In addition, financial burden is another problem to single household. All the living expenses or other expenses related to daily activities supposed to be managed by people. With their inexperience in budgeting and planning for saving the money, living alone can be challenging. The impulsive spending habit can be formed and which can lead to uncontrollable spending lead to bankruptcy. Insufficient manage of that budgeting can lead to credit default.
To summarise, every issue have its benefits and drawbacks and which is equivalent to this case. Living alone can provide the freedom and independent lifestyles, but it is inevitable to face the responsibilities and financial burden. As far as I am concerned, there are both negatives and positives to this system, but the negatives seem to far outweigh the positives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 417, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this freedom' or 'those freedoms'?
Suggestion: this freedom; those freedoms
...benefits, because the consequences from those freedom and independent can have fatal damages....
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Line 4, column 502, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... skills can lead to fatal damages. From this people have to be responsible for their...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'likewise', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'for instance', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221030042918 0.247107183377 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.156652360515 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0944206008584 0.0946595960268 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0364806866953 0.0501214627716 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0515021459227 0.0437548338989 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100858369099 0.122226691241 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0364806866953 0.0403226058552 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.03135631825 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.049356223176 0.0326793684256 151% => OK
Particles: 0.00429184549356 0.00163938923432 262% => OK
Determiners: 0.0815450643777 0.0861772015684 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0343347639485 0.021408717616 160% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00643776824034 0.011925033212 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2627.0 1933.35771543 136% => OK
No of words: 418.0 316.048096192 132% => OK
Chars per words: 6.28468899522 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20517956788 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.370813397129 0.374742101984 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.27990430622 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.215311004785 0.203846283523 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.162679425837 0.137316102897 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03135631825 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.037074148 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466507177033 0.56093040696 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.7322171616 60.7387585426 84% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0891783567 155% => OK
Sentence length: 16.72 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3071770917 49.517814964 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.08 127.492653851 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.72 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.36 0.814263465372 44% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 44.710430622 49.1944974215 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.4649122807 1.69124875643 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359863917498 0.332605444948 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118130026242 0.102741220458 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0902332976962 0.0668466124924 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.526639988683 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125596048144 0.148594505496 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136988539354 0.134430193775 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785796945805 0.0742795772207 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.375129217674 0.324371583561 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0258431303225 0.0638462369009 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24028845946 0.228012699653 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583270223149 0.058150111329 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.