The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012.

Essay topics:

The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012.

The chart represents how many British and international students studied a computer science major by its gender in the UK University from 2010 to 2012.
Overall, there were more British students than that of international students studied for the computer science for the projected periods. Among them, there was more number of women than that of men.
In terms of male students, about 40 British students studied a computer science, whereas 20 international students were in the UK University in 2010. By 2011, UK University experienced to have 25 students in a computer science major for both countries and it rose drastically to reach at about 42 British male students and close to 40 international male students by 2012.
Meanwhile, there were higher British women students than that of international students studied the computer science throughout the projected periods. About 32 British students and close to 15 international students studied in the computer science in 2010. In the next two consecutive years, British female students rose significantly to close to 45 students while the number of international students increased constantly to end at 20 students.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'whereas', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245 0.268076937826 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.115 0.116061578633 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125 0.0759168565197 165% => OK
Adverbs: 0.025 0.0366838410393 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.015 0.0131127313244 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.155 0.155750635184 100% => OK
Participles: 0.02 0.0379272487307 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02617748697 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.04 0.0210936926555 190% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.085 0.0948980150116 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.005 0.00967000014798 52% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1177.0 1161.00487805 101% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.9 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36216216216 5.90752243213 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.394594594595 0.337110787985 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.362162162162 0.247514529752 146% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.264864864865 0.171178102325 155% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12972972973 0.112407865282 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02617748697 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427027027027 0.546246751206 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 34.5716131014 49.3433353143 70% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 23.125 23.0094962315 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9020696701 42.9750493124 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.125 135.714022679 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 23.0094962315 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.689975730869 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 59.3412162162 47.7609492067 124% => OK
Elegance: 2.70967741935 2.94281807926 92% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396651209765 0.418131533498 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.237402993325 0.181151798455 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108173264156 0.0850326197045 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.788688473519 0.706616315825 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.109338035944 0.157042692854 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.237922620363 0.228904883108 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719337354442 0.108899403657 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.334906864961 0.367819155151 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.185403474977 0.0812612215331 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300983502058 0.316326947829 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533699889651 0.0921553760075 58% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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