The chart below shows the amount of sales for four different kinds of foods in supermarkets in four different cities in America.
The chart represents the four types of foods (bars, crackers, snacks and cookies) sold in supermarkets located in four different cities in the US, namely; New York, Boston, Los Angeles and San Diego. Units are measured in millions of dollars.
Overall, Boston had the highest sales in all food types and Los Angeles had more sales in Crackers and bars. San Diego had the lowest sales in all types of foods.
Looking in details for cookies and snacks, Boston recorded the highest sales for both types of foods of $3500 million for cookies and $500 million for snacks, while New York and Los Angeles had the same amount of sales in cookies of $2500 million. The amount of sales for snacks was slightly higher for Los Angeles than that of New York as both recorded at below $500 million. The lowest sales was San Diego of around $1500 million for cookies and $500 million for snacks.
In terms of crackers and bars, $1000 million and about $2600 million sold respectively for Boston located supermarket, whereas Los Angeles experienced of around $600 million and $2500 million sold for crackers and bars, respectively. This is followed by New York of around $2400 million for bars and just below $500 million for crackers, whilst the lowest sales were made by San Diego which sales were just above $1000 million for bars and half of those were for crackers.
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'look', 'so', 'whereas', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.322957198444 0.268076937826 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.0972762645914 0.116061578633 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0311284046693 0.0759168565197 41% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0272373540856 0.0366838410393 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.20233463035 0.155750635184 130% => OK
Participles: 0.0389105058366 0.0379272487307 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.2394220945 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0210936926555 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0661478599222 0.0948980150116 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00389105058366 0.00967000014798 40% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1331.0 1161.00487805 115% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.9 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66382978723 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73763899035 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314893617021 0.337110787985 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23829787234 0.247514529752 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0978723404255 0.171178102325 57% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0425531914894 0.112407865282 38% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.2394220945 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.395744680851 0.546246751206 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 34.8132979171 49.3433353143 71% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.1111111111 23.0094962315 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6251538038 42.9750493124 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.888888889 135.714022679 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 23.0094962315 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.689975730869 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 49.9408983452 47.7609492067 105% => OK
Elegance: 4.53125 2.94281807926 154% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392373541514 0.418131533498 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.323520611193 0.181151798455 179% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.152413588644 0.0850326197045 179% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.783886462717 0.706616315825 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148792570273 0.157042692854 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233200123047 0.228904883108 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112335464902 0.108899403657 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.416171773168 0.367819155151 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0895655714166 0.0812612215331 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310090960944 0.316326947829 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132012048857 0.0921553760075 143% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.