The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Young people are the future of any country. The progress of any country depends on these young minds. So moulding the young generation in a proper way becomes very necessary. Instilling good qualities in them is a surest way of ensuring the goodness of society by preparing good leaders.
It is rightly said that good leaders not only themselves go ahead, but lift the people surrounding them.Generosity and co-operation are a distinct trait of people who make good leaders. These qualities get be impressed on their minds in their youth. Youth is the most inluential part of everybody's life. Things learnt in youth go a long way in shaping the character of a person.
In any field the surest way to progress is to work together as a team. A single person is not capable of learning all the things, but together, as a team, people have created miracles. For example, Henry Ford, he himself not being so technically talented, knew how to harness individual capabilities. This in turn led to Ford's success.
Consider the game of cricket. Here team work and co-operation are very critical.Internal competition within team members can prove deleterious for the team's success. Some players are part of the team and some players are kept out of the team for matches depending on the player's form, health etc. So the players should not take this being kept out of the team personally and think of the big picture. Here, the team captain has to play a very crucial role. He is responsible for maintaining healthy spirit among team members. And he can do so only if he himself has the qualities of co-operation instilled in him.
Similarly, government of any country cannot be ruled by a single person. It takes many delegates to take responsibilities of their respective zones and work in symbiosis with other members to achieve the country's unified goal.
However, sometimes competition creates some good outcomes. Consider the telecom industry. Once upon a time call charges were large. Both incoming and outgoing was charged exorbitantly. But the emergence of many companies provied incentives for companies to outperform others. This, in turn, motivating them to develop newer technologies at affordale prices.
So I agree that instilling qualities of symbiosis among young people will help them in becoming good leaders. But a spirit of healthy competition also needs to be engraved on their minds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...minds. So moulding the young generation in a proper way becomes very necessary. Instilling good...
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...y. Instilling good qualities in them is a surest way of ensuring the goodness of ...
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Suggestion: Generosity
...d, but lift the people surrounding them.Generosity and co-operation are a distinct trait o...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'ford'.
Suggestion: Ford
...idual capabilities. This in turn led to Fords success. Consider the game of cricket....
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Suggestion: Internal
...work and co-operation are very critical.Internal competition within team members can pro...
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Suggestion: teams'; team's
...m members can prove deleterious for the teams success. Some players are part of the t...
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Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...utcomes. Consider the telecom industry. Once upon a time call charges were large. Bo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'similarly', 'so', 'still', 'as to', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244343891403 0.240241500013 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.171945701357 0.157235817809 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0859728506787 0.0880659088768 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0633484162896 0.0497285424764 127% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0407239819005 0.0444667217837 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126696832579 0.12292977631 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0565610859729 0.0406280797675 139% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88021506949 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0226244343891 0.030933414821 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.106334841629 0.0997080785238 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0113122171946 0.0249443105267 45% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00452488687783 0.0148568991511 30% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2399.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 399.0 452.878318584 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01253132832 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355889724311 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.293233082707 0.280924506359 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.200501253133 0.200843997647 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135338345865 0.132149295362 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88021506949 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 219.290929204 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533834586466 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 60.088949088 55.4138127331 108% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6194690265 141% => OK
Sentence length: 13.7586206897 23.380412469 59% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4272500827 59.4972553346 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.724137931 141.124799967 59% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7586206897 23.380412469 59% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.310344827586 0.674092028746 46% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 43.0819289603 51.4728631049 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.54918032787 1.64882698954 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375281179014 0.391690518653 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0955794778793 0.123202303941 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.114965165485 0.077325440228 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.473177594544 0.547984918172 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140567931603 0.149214159877 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109545820284 0.161403998019 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558255862249 0.0892212321368 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.209435674348 0.385218514788 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0823319449198 0.0692045440612 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208414256718 0.275328986314 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044271043243 0.0653680567796 68% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.4325221239 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88274336283 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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