Intelligence is most important component for leadership. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and support it with adequate examples.
It is thought by some people that intelligence is the number one in priority among qualities that successful leader need. This opinion implies that choosing the manager of a company or facility employers should pay attention only to the level of intelligence of possible leader. I totally disagree with this statement, as there few equally important features leader should have.
To begin with, ability to communicate with people is very important for a leader. The leader can understand the problem related to manufacturing or technical issues, and the same time fail these issues due the human factor. Before taking particular measurements manager ought to be able to motivate people, to be aware about his employees’ abilities and list goes on and on. To give a clear example, two years ago Ukrainian travelling company lost more than 50 clients, because their well-trained manager couldn’t be polite and outgoing with clients. When someone called him, he was very rude with answers, dropped the phone in the middle of conversation and other things he should haven’t done. As a result, people complained his behavior and this man was fired. But the company couldn’t return their clients.
The second essential feature is integrity. In modern world the possibility of stealing is very high. Sorry to say, there is a huge number of people who have been fired or put in the prison for the last decade due theft, abusing the power and other criminal activities. The interest fact is that most of them are highly intelligent people. Thus, the former president of Ukraine was caught with a great deal of illegal possessions, which were stolen from county’s population.
In conclusion, the intelligence is very important for leadership, however this ability is not crucial. The features, as honesty and ability to understand people are equally important for this purpose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 351, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'features'' or 'feature's'?
Suggestion: features'; feature's
...atement, as there few equally important features leader should have. To begin with, abi...
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Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'measurements'' or 'measurement's'?
Suggestion: measurements'; measurement's
... human factor. Before taking particular measurements manager ought to be able to motivate pe...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.157303370787 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101123595506 0.0946595960268 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0365168539326 0.0501214627716 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0280898876404 0.0437548338989 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109550561798 0.122226691241 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0421348314607 0.0403226058552 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88124096792 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0280898876404 0.0326793684256 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0898876404494 0.0861772015684 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0140449438202 0.021408717616 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0112359550562 0.011925033212 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1895.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 316.048096192 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23355263158 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.407894736842 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.305921052632 0.28420135186 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197368421053 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134868421053 0.137316102897 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88124096792 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618421052632 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 70.8295844541 60.7387585426 117% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8823529412 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9250574098 49.517814964 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.470588235 127.492653851 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.529411764706 0.814263465372 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 48.4744582043 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.81012658228 1.69124875643 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171109675021 0.332605444948 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0981718330327 0.102741220458 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0626580439788 0.0668466124924 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.499801953852 0.534860350844 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132806126123 0.148594505496 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691635131579 0.134430193775 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476436505921 0.0742795772207 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.270379134169 0.324371583561 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0379875006161 0.0638462369009 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128152527316 0.228012699653 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353603983561 0.058150111329 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.