do you agree or disagree? parents today are more involved in their children’s' education than were parents in the past .
The question is whether parents today are more involved in their children’s' education than were parents in the past or not. Everyone in consideration to his private viewpoint can maintain a special direction toward this idea. In my vantage point nowadays people have some advantages which have caused people to be superior in compared with humans lived in the past, subsequently I strongly affirm this opinion. My reasons and arguments are listed below that will strengthen my point of view:
To begin with, it is axiomatic that the families would rather have few children. It goes without saying that growing population provides some undeniable troubles in society such as economical crisis, increasing social norms and crimes and so on. In such a circumstance having one o two children is the most logical decision for parents. Unlike the past that people lived in crowded families, today's every house is restricted to four or five people; hence the parents have enough time for spending time with their children.
The second reason why I advocate this point of view lies in the fact that because of optimizing technology and rising up awareness level among humans, the parents are more educated than past. Nobody could overlook this issue that parents are able to work with the computer and internet and other advanced tools. This is one of the most salient developments in modern life; subsequently the families can guide their children not only in education, but also in any major.
Having discussed this issue from this point of view, I am going to empower it by the following discussion. In the past when people were returning from their workplace, there were a lot of things for doing. They were more self-sufficient and were trying to produce their food or clothes by themselves; in contrast today’s people do not waste their time for these things, all of these stuffs can be found in the most equipped stores. As a result due to having free time, the parents can evaluate their children's schoolwork.
By taking all above mentioned arguments, this conclusion could be drown that today's parents because of having high level of literacy, freedom and technology can help to their children more than before. In fact they play a crucial role in children's life in a spread spectrum.
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- TPO11 73
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 383 350
No. of Characters: 1871 1500
No. of Different Words: 208 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.424 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.885 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.53 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 134 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 97 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.529 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.822 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.471 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.45 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.052 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... undeniable troubles in society such as economical crisis, increasing social norms and cri...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'in contrast', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in contrast to', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248226950355 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.156028368794 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0827423167849 0.0866891130778 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0401891252955 0.046263068375 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0496453900709 0.0685040099705 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144208037825 0.118717715034 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0567375886525 0.0351676179071 161% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63631299882 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0212765957447 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00236406619385 0.00188951952338 125% => OK
Determiners: 0.096926713948 0.0887237588012 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0212765957447 0.0209618222197 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00709219858156 0.0139019557991 51% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2301.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 383.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00783289817 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357702349869 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263707571802 0.251872472559 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182767624021 0.174417080927 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109660574413 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63631299882 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563968668407 0.524397521467 108% => OK
Word variations: 64.6983606538 59.2087087015 109% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 23.9375 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2344146037 48.84282405 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.8125 120.699889404 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9375 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.644075263715 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 50.3082571802 45.7405998639 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.82692307692 1.45489161554 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424269463607 0.300154397459 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107389166808 0.103427244359 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0668986721659 0.0752933317313 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.532461300775 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125154246771 0.151897553556 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172351007649 0.114077575197 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157643667635 0.0781384742642 202% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.30953537555 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.027967147212 0.067059652881 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273232017521 0.210909579961 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823089107649 0.0618886996521 133% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.