Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.
The number of men who take maternity leave nowadays is as great as it has never been before in human history, according to social statistics agencies. Historically it tends to be women, who rear children, while men usually are responsible for being breadwinners since they suit to the position for the following characteristics: maternal instincts, to understand children better than men do and psychological aspects. Nevertheless, the recent statistics indicate that men can be as well-qualified in child rearing as women are due to the following factors.
First of all, our lifestyle has substantially changed over the last two decades allowing to minimize gender gap. These days, for example, the same number of women can be seen in positions where men used to dominate. Thus, it has also triggered men to consider their role as a babysitter while the wives work. My uncle, for instance, brings up his daughter while his wife runs a company. The wife satisfies with how the man copes with the parenting role.
Secondly, it might be a big misconception that men are worse in raising children than women due to the fact that there is a significant number of single dads in most societies. Many fathers become a single parent due to either the loss or divorce taking a responsibility rear the children. Tom Cruise, for instance, is perfectly making the parenting despite his very busy schedule.
It is a controversial question that whether men or women do better parenting; however, it is likely that the role of the both agents are getting similar making difficult to determine the distinct one in the role.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'minimizing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: minimizing
...nged over the last two decades allowing to minimize gender gap. These days, for example, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99259259259 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89269454935 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0129127674 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306759720001 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100104756631 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756113216754 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185576227434 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465816457887 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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