At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Are sports and social activities as significant as scientific activities to obtain equal financial support at universities and colleges? Not surprisingly, there are some controversies over this issue. I am totally convinced that the equipped classes and libraries are more vital for student's future and to support my stance, I will approach the topic from the following perspectives: mental and physical health, job prospects and practical knowledge.
The first point in discussion is mental and physical health. Inherent to this aspect of the issue is the belief that the university should spend considerable money to facilitate the gym of the university to encourage the students to spend a portion of their time to do physical activities. As a result, not only they would be healthy from the perspective of physical and mental, also, they can do efficiently in their classes.
Another aspect to focus on is career opportunities. That is, having advanced libraries and classes will affect on the literacy of graders. So, they will be able to have a good chance to find a pleasant position. For instance, one of my friends was studied at a high level university. Her university had equipped library with a huge amount of new published books and computers to do research on certain topic. They also gained financial support to perform experimental researchers. Finally, she become a literate person and found a good work.
To further the argument in support of importance of classes and libraries funding, it is necessary to point to the practical knowledge. Students need to go to expedition or scientific conference by support of university. It is better to say that, almost all the students do not have a good financial situation to attend in scientific visits or important conferences to improve their industrial vision. Is it possible to have active and clever students without fiscal aids by the university? Obviously, the answer to this question indicates the importance of this point.
As a closing remark, despite of the arguments from both advocates and opponents of the issue, my opposition seems to be impressive, since the equipped classes and libraries are more important than sport and social activities for the students.
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...nd social activities for the students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20718232044 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99203408078 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53591160221 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7478796366 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2105263158 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0526315789 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262742374618 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743781583115 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884095628318 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145539691644 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735948416234 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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