Davis Technologies, a computer-chip maker, could solve its problem of declining sales by dropping its prices. This would make Davis better able to compete in the highly competitive computer chip market. The sales of chips would increase and this would substantially boost Davis\' market share.
Describe how well reasoned you find this argument. In the discussion be sure to analyze the line of reasoning and the use of evidence in the argument. For example, you may need to consider what questionable assumptions underlie the thinking and what alternative explanations or counterexamples might weaken the argument\'s conclusion. You may also address possible changes in the argument that would make it more logically sound, and what, if anything, would help you better evaluate its conclusion.
The following argument is erroneous for the multitudinous reasons, Primarily, the argument is
based on unjustified assumption that reducing the price of the chips can increase its sales,
which proves its main conclusion that the sales of chips would increase and this would boost
davis market share invalid.
The given argument fails to provide justification that reducing the price would increase the
davis market share. Perhaps, it may even decrease the sales of the chips since buyers may
think chips are made using low quality material and that is the reason they are very cheap
when compared to similar kinds of chips in the market. Adding to that if the davis technology
reduce the price of the chips it may result in loss to the company and employees may not get
the company benefits.
The argument leaves many other unresolved claims and reducing the price would make davis
better able to compete in the highly competitive computer chip market. For one, the most
important is that, if the price of the other chips are less than that of davis then its hard to capture
the market share for davis in highly demanded computer chips market. So that davis aim of
competing in highly competitive market can be demolished and the company may be
ephemeral. IF the davis had done survey about the prices of the different chips it would be
helpful for them to decide their price of the chips.
Because the argument makes several unwarranted assumptions, it fails to make a convincing
statement that the reducing the price of the chips would substantially boost the market share of
davis technologies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 55.5748502994 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 2260.96107784 61% => OK
No of words: 271.0 441.139720559 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0479704797 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5071513028 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 204.123752495 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464944649446 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 705.55239521 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.471057884232 212% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.8473053892 131% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4433021697 57.8364921388 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.0 119.503703932 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1111111111 23.324526521 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.70786347227 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 5.15768463074 368% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454201244406 0.218282227539 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209802982142 0.0743258471296 282% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967949383812 0.0701772020484 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140000900718 0.128457276422 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106493184521 0.0628817314937 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.3799401198 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 98.500998004 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.1389221557 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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