Some people think that people should not use mobiles phone in public places, but people think that people should be allowed to use cell phones anywhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the ubiquity of mobile phones, especially smartphones creates conflicts opinions about its usage in public places. In this essay, I will discuss both why people support and not support to use mobile phones in public areas.
There are various reasons why people support to use mobile phones in any unrestricted places. First and foremost, it is true that people are not illegal to use cell phones outside restricted areas such as military places or government offices. Moreover, people nowadays use mobile devices not only for contact purposes but also for work and entertainment. Therefore, restricting people using mobile devices in public areas can raise a huge disapproval from many individuals.
However, there are some negative aspects might be caused by using mobile phones in public areas. Firstly, some people tend to bother others while using mobile devices, which they may be not self-aware, such as in the situation of talking on a phone call loudly or listening to music without a headphone. Besides that, it is a lack of respect when using mobile devices during communications with others in person. Secondly, there are many cases around the word over the news and media about accidents which are mainly caused by mobile devices usage; Too much concentrating on mobile devices harm not only the owner and other people such as in cases of transportation accidents but also other valuable objects such as in cases of accidents with antiquities in museums. Therefore, it is necessary to have a restriction in mobile usage in those public areas.
In conclusion, there are still many conflict opinions about mobile usage in public areas. From my point of view, while I do agree that people have the permission to use mobile devices in any open area, I believe that people should not use or carefully use mobiles in public places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 535, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'devices'' or 'device's'?
Suggestion: devices'; device's
...dents which are mainly caused by mobile devices usage; Too much concentrating on mobile...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08852459016 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63037882647 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508196721311 0.561755894193 90% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0606041872 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.384615385 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429726820581 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177127560007 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101034927538 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3025080309 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603710624812 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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