tpo 40
The reading states that the condition on the Mars is not suitable for human presence on it for a long time and provides three reasons to support its claim. However, the lecture states that although standing human permanent presence on Mars is challenging issue, it is impossible.
First, the passage says that the pressure on the earth is 90 times extremer than the earth' pressure since all construction would be crushed. On the contrary, the professor suggests that the astronomers can establish a station which flows in the atmosphere because in the high height the pressure is lower than the surface. So, they can flow on the 50 km height which pressure is normal and equal to earth surface since it is not dangerous for human and equipment and does not crush them.
Second, the reading passage claims that there is not any source of water and oxygen on the Mars and they must be provided from the earth. In contrast, the lecture declares this solution that the atmosphere of Mars is full of chemical components such as carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid. Humans can produce the water and oxygen by this two chemical materials in their station. So, they do not need to bring water for their trip to the Mars.
Third, the reading asserts that the surface of MarS is coverEd by thick clouds which do not let the light recieveS on the surface of Mars. As a result, humans can not produce the require electricity out of sunlight. On the other hand, the lecture states that it is true that the clouds cover the atmosphere of Mars, but this cloud is not thick to prevent the light to through from them. In fact, the considerable amount of light pass through these clouds and reach the surface. Also, the station can use from the reflected and passed lights for producing an enough amount of electricity.
- young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping to their communities 70
- Tpo 46. The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. 73
- Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? 73
- Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site. 73
- Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is challenging issue, it is impossible. First, the passage says that the pressur...
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Line 2, column 489, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and equipment and does not crush them. Second, the reading passage claims that ...
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bring water for their trip to the Mars. Third, the reading asserts that the surf...
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Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s. As a result, humans can not produce the require electricity out of sunlight. On the oth...
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Line 4, column 590, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ducing an enough amount of electricity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, so, third, in contrast, in fact, such as, as a result, it is true, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 317.0 270.72406181 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69085173502 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38062314898 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476340694006 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5315324173 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06452816374 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311708652485 0.272083759551 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105278511089 0.0996497079465 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411949894536 0.0662205650399 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1685472809 0.162205337803 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509903010259 0.0443174109184 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.8541721854 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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