In June 1996, an experimental flu vaccine was trialled in a large country town on females only.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts show the number of deaths from flu, the percentage of four groups female receipts of new vaccine groups most at risk and flu rates from females and males in 1996.
Overall, it is clear that the trend that women infected with the flu and the number of women dead were consistently higher than those of men, and new flu vaccines were mainly trialled on the women aged over 65.
Looking at the bar chart, from March to May, the number of women dead stood at 1m. This figure then rose four times to between June to August while the figure for males only accounted for 2m of dead cases.
Reading the pie chart, 35% of new flu vaccines experimented on women who were over 65 years old and were at risk. This number was the highest comparing with other groups. However, the next highest level with 28 percent was in the female receipts without giving vaccines. On the other hand, there were only 24 percent babies and children were potentially infected with flu and needed vaccines while only 13 percent of patients in hospitals needed flu vaccines.
Turning to the line chart, flu rates saw a similar trend in both male and females. Stood at 0 cases of flu in both sex, the number of infection with the flu on males and females rose gradually to 500 and 1000 cases respectively. Notably, those figures had grown sharply and reached a peak at just over 2500 and 3500 cases respectively by Jun before a steady drop to 1500 and 2500 cases respectively in Dec.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, may, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 265.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56226415094 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22528273091 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51320754717 0.547539520022 94% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.070712377 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.909090909 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126028932737 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512308328971 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374794897808 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764323365547 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391926296727 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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