Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Views differ from person to person. Some people think that it is better have a broad knowledge of different academic subjects than to focus on a specific subject, whereas others cast doubt on it, holding specialists are more helpful to the society. Whether diversifying knowledge is better than specializing a specific subject is open to contention. From my point of view, broadening knowledge plays an imperative role in one's life.
To begin with, with the advent of information explosion era, more and more new scientific discoveries or novel therapies have been revealed or implemented. These new discoveries and breakthrough in the medicine facilitate the daily life quality or health quality. For example, immunotherapy becomes the promising treatments for cancer by using antibodies for targeting a unique surface marker of the immune cell to activate immune cells activation and thus kill cancer cells. If one does not have a general concept for immunology, he or she will not know this novel treatment.
Moreover, state-of-the-art technologies usually combine with distinct professional fields. Many innovative engineering and development of new machines require scientists with dual backgrounds. For instant, the invention of single cell sorter, a novel machine is used for separating single cell to a well camber, needs experts coming from physics, mechanical engineering, and cell biology. If a biologist without a broad knowledge, he or she will have a trouble to communicate with other developers.
To conclude, taking into account all the reasons, I strongly believe that it is more imperative to obtain diverse knowledge than to specialize in a specific profession field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cells'' or 'cell's'?
Suggestion: cells'; cell's
...r of the immune cell to activate immune cells activation and thus kill cancer cells. ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun engineering seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much innovative engineering', 'a good deal of innovative engineering'.
Suggestion: Much innovative engineering; A good deal of innovative engineering
...bine with distinct professional fields. Many innovative engineering and development of new machines require...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 261.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51340996169 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09780007282 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651340996169 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0480411943 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.692307692 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230949269185 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814327674514 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097994593664 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136458169422 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10193959646 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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