You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
Explain why you are selling the television.
Describe the television.
Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.
Dear Joseph,
It's been a long time since we have met last time. I hope you're doing well. I hope you family doing fine. I am good in spite of heavy work schedule. The reason i am writing this email that i got your text message regarding interest in my old TV.
I believe you would've seen the TV many times in the previous visits to my place. It is a SONY Flatron 21" television and manufactured in 2011. It doesn't have any signs of usages however, it lacks some of the latest technological features such as USB ports, HDMI. This was the main reason i thought of upgrading my TV to Latest LCD series.
I prefer you to come to my place before deciding to purchase the TV. that can help you to have a close look on it and we can have a nice party after long time.
Hope to hear from your soon,
Best Regards,
Dany Kallery
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ime since we have met last time. I hope youre doing well. I hope you family doing fin...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ing well. I hope you family doing fine. I am good in spite of heavy work schedule...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...pite of heavy work schedule. The reason i am writing this email that i got your t...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...The reason i am writing this email that i got your text message regarding interes...
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Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: would've
... interest in my old TV. I believe you wouldve seen the TV many times in the previous ...
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Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...television and manufactured in 2011. It doesnt have any signs of usages however, it la...
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Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...B ports, HDMI. This was the main reason i thought of upgrading my TV to Latest LC...
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Line 4, column 323, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the Latest'.
Suggestion: to the Latest
...ain reason i thought of upgrading my TV to Latest LCD series. I prefer you to come to my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, regarding, so, well, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 678.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2375 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22482443128 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2809341539 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.5 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167683854141 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063263346155 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571099003918 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120779463915 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539928861159 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.72 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.