Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position.
The assertion that scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems therefor everyone knows that and no can ever think to do. On the one hand scandals are useful because of every people can know know that what is going on the world and no could to cheat to its nation and the society. On the other hand scandals would to essential to exposed .
Firstly the scandals are essential to exposed and essential to who had been cheated to nation and society for any kind of related to property, money. Laws could be strict for the person who admitted to think to do that. Role for the police and government to investigate scandal and punishment gone be strict for the victim. If laws are strict therefor people can scarred to do the crimes and scandals.
Furthermore honesty is everything. media has to be play an important role to exposed scandals through the peoples , society to everyone knows and increases awareness to peoples. Scandals are useful to know to people which kind of problems are tricks are used to corn the people and society. In the world many of scandals are exposed but some are extremely big.For example scandal is exposed in India " 2G spectrum case " .In the given example technical company corn the money of government. Main effected by the scandals are poor peoples and the economy of the nation is damaged.
To conclude scandals is a kind of crime no one can stop it. It's up to us to think about the nation and society. Scandals effects the county so honest to our country and think how to promote the county to next level.Scandals takes attention of people to never could do the crime. Do the focus in always in how to support our nation and economy not to how to cheat to nation.Always be honest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: know
... are useful because of every people can know know that what is going on the world and no ...
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Suggestion: now
... are useful because of every people can know know that what is going on the world an...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...now that what is going on the world and no could to cheat to its nation and the so...
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Suggestion: .
...d scandals would to essential to exposed . Firstly the scandals are essential t...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'admitted thinking'.
Suggestion: admitted thinking
...Laws could be strict for the person who admitted to think to do that. Role for the police and gov...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
...rred to do the crimes and scandals. Furthermore honesty is everything. media has to be ...
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... Furthermore honesty is everything. media has to be play an important role to exp...
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Suggestion: ,
... to exposed scandals through the peoples , society to everyone knows and increases...
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Suggestion: For
... are exposed but some are extremely big.For example scandal is exposed in India &ap...
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... in India ' 2G spectrum case ' .In the given example technical company c...
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Suggestion: In
...n India ' 2G spectrum case ' .In the given example technical company cor...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... is a kind of crime no one can stop it. Its up to us to think about the nation and ...
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Suggestion: Scandals
...how to promote the county to next level.Scandals takes attention of people to never coul...
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Suggestion: Always
...d economy not to how to cheat to nation.Always be honest.
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Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: Be Always
...d economy not to how to cheat to nation.Always be honest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, as to, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 311.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64308681672 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44738444394 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453376205788 0.4932671777 92% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.794441034 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16117965672 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578982174364 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679649235086 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108192454405 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664290060141 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.