People are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon.
People's average life span has increased recently because of some reasons. We can count living healthier, using brand new technology in medicine and enhancement of life conditions as its reasons.
Nowadays, especially teenagers search a lot and try to learn how to live healthy. They read a large number of news and magazines which are sometimes provided by government to expand the awareness of society on consumption of natural products and eschewing the chemical sources. Furthermore more people consider the sport advancing life quality as a part of life and know overweight deranges the health.
Like all branches of science, also medicine has showed improvements of prime importance. Before a few decades, people used to suffer from severe diseases and die suddenly since the technology of that day was not convenient enough and there was not vaccination. But now we have the newest technology in medicine and ways of treatment to cure for even the most unrelenting diseases like pneumonia and hectic fever.
Another reason causing the people live longer is their economic situation. Life conditions are gradually changing in a good way relatively to the past,because economic potential of community has advanced substantially.People can afford the medical care while past generations couldn't do. They didn't have enough diet to meet their daily nutrition necessity and had to even eat perished food.
All in all, people live longer because of economic growth in world, technology improvement in medicine and having more conscious on living healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 245.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40816326531 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93735793475 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644897959184 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4864906685 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.416666667 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18582147804 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698566542471 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867518394897 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102258616799 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532386412129 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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