In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
“Practice makes a man perfect”, This is a fact which we look from our recent times. Expert is a person who is experienced with a particular field. There is no comparision between a new comer and a trained person. I do not agree with the beginner is more likely than the expert to amke important contributions. A fresher person done the discoveries by chance, otherwise expert achieve position by gone through many different stages in life.
Expert is expert whatever you say, he is much trained and know the basic skills. The neophyte person have a goal to reach in future endeavor but that target achieves with experience. Although, a learner fails many times, however turn into the expert with many years of valuable practice. A skillful man have a different perspective and understanding in a problem which only comes from phenomenon.
To illustrate, a person made dish first time then made again and again, now he is perfect in flavours and becomes excellent chef. If we look at the scientist, Albert Einstein is initially saw an apple fell down from a tree and did not know, after that he studied, researched then found the concept of gravity. In same manner, one of the film director does not successful after one film, he realesed many films, trained and experienced by doing it. At last achieve the superhit success, that all will happen by growing and doing the learning everyday. In this case, film director trained by doing their task and at the end, he become excellent director and know the taste of the public.
In contrast, expert view many different issues and become trained. However, there are many scientists who were discovered in the early age. If we look at the example of Madam Curie who invented radium in small age and became famous throughout the globe and people uses a the radium nowadays.
In recapitulating, there is no comparision between neophyte and expert. Trained person get a valuable position by gone through many stages of learning. Thus, newcomer can discover a thing but mostly it happened by chance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: NEW_COMER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newcomer'?
Suggestion: newcomer
...ield. There is no comparision between a new comer and a trained person. I do not agree wi...
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Line 1, column 420, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...expert achieve position by gone through many different stages in life. Expert is expert whate...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sawed', 'sawn', 'seen'.
Suggestion: sawed; sawn; seen
...scientist, Albert Einstein is initially saw an apple fell down from a tree and did ...
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Line 3, column 541, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...appen by growing and doing the learning everyday. In this case, film director trained by...
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Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...f the public. In contrast, expert view many different issues and become trained. However, the...
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Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
...us throughout the globe and people uses a the radium nowadays. In recapitulating...
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Line 4, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and people uses a the radium nowadays. In recapitulating, there is no comparisi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, then, thus, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89398280802 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72138432196 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561604584527 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9488262695 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.4 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130783575437 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434167299837 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708425024377 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755077180432 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779557911913 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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