Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world's forests amounts to death of the world we currently know.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Just as the lungs purify blood, forests cleanse and oxygenate the air without which life would be non-existent. Due to its unparalleled role in maintaining life on earth, I am in consummate agreement that deforestation will eventually threaten our own survival.
The most significant role is a plants' ability to photosynthesize; the elimination of carbon dioxide from the air by absorbing it and and releasing oxygen. This air borne oxygen is the chemical that enables respiration to occur in all living cells and thus organisms of all shapes and size are able to flourish on earth . Deforestation not only adversely affects oxygen levels but also disrupts the delicate atmospheric oxygen-carbon dioxide ratio, leading to global warming. A 2014 report revealed that cutting down 2.4% of the earths' forest coverage led to a 10% increment in carbon dioxide concentrations worldwide. This imbalance exacerbates the effects of the worldwide temperature rise, resulting in droughts, flooding and eventually human casualties.
In addition, rain forests such as the Amazon, house a variety of animal and plant species, some of which are found nowhere else on earth. Both these organisms and trees are utilized to extract serums that are essential ingredients in numerous pharmaceutical drugs such as Penicillin, Ventol and Panadol. Habitat destruction will lead to a diminished diversity as well as a lack of raw materials to develop life-saving medicinal produce.
In conclusion, trees play a crucial role in maintaining the earths' ecosystem. However if immediate forest conservation schemes are not implemented, earth will gradually become an inhospitable planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54509803922 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19285701802 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.1781581874 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108489019054 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390054201994 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370617438507 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699655014024 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197617305696 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.