The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problem? .In order to reduce the problem, should we discourage people to use car
It is said that car is one of the most necessary things in modern life nowadays and it also causes major problems for human. This essay will first discuss some effects of this issue and then will give the answer for the control how people using car is the effective solution for this problem or not.
Firstly, it is clear that increasing using car will lead environment problems. The particular problem is air pollution. As a consequence od car's machine working, it will bring amounts of Co2 into the air. Moreover, polluted atmosphere can cause human's health some disease such as lung problems. One clear example for this problem is Beijing which is considered as the most polluted city in the world. Because of over controlling of using car, day time as well as night time, whole city is covered by a polluted fox.
In the other hand, it is said that one of solutions to solve this problem is reducing car in the street. This is such the most effective way.
In conclusion, although the over of using car leads many issue, it might be solved by discouraging people driving car.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun issue seems to be countable; consider using: 'many issues'.
Suggestion: many issues
...n, although the over of using car leads many issue, it might be solved by discouraging peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67708333333 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42542862048 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0748628392 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6363636364 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318050787824 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121677298644 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741682185907 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20478899947 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520398764678 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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