“Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.”
I would like to strongly advocate the assertion that institutions have a responsibility towards students that they should not go the fields of study in which they can not get much out of it or they are unlikely to succeed . Every Education institutions are the root of the any student's career life in root . So if the student is thought to be going in the wrong direction , the institute must help the student by choosing the right side and to come out from the uncertainty of choosing Fields.
Every Student have a unique personality which leads them to different directions .Every institute must play a lead and important role to identify the skills of a student and nurture them according to their needs .In Student's life this Institutes provides place of a guide and directs them .So if the institutes find any possible issue in their future they try to redirect them and help them to reach their goal.
It may be possible that they might have to take some harsh steps to prevent students from beginning their future but the efforts they give after students is the real Deal . But sometimes main issue is that the Education is becoming just a Competition of Marks which makes a society of High ranker not scholars .The Institutes which motivates the students to gain the knowledge and find their forte represents a great quality of the Institutes.
The Education institutes play an important role in student’s life by providing them multiple pathways in which they could possibly succeed . But sometimes main issue with the either of them is some institutes doesn’t have a clue what to do about the student they just let them sink into the darkness and once they get paid just forgets the whole thing of Supporting Student.
A certain Studies Shows that at age of 20-22 23.56% Students of the popularity couldn’t get Enough guidance and direction for what to do further in their life makes them doing Wrong and worsen their chances to get a Great Future .Here 23.56%, Which indeed represents a big Chunk from the total Students Shows that most of the students need a Education institute or Support to Understand their place and position in their time being and show them the mirror of real life where they Stand in actual situation .So according to me Every Educational Institutes plays an Important role by providing them enough information about the Career they choose.
In sum , all the institutes are having responsibility of dissuading students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed , Because if they doesn’t the Students might end up taking wrong fields of study makes they career path difficult for them to follow ahead . So if institutes helps the Students they can be pulled out from worsen Situation to a big bright future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2322.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 475.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88842105263 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64833986345 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444210526316 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.0 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 23.0359550562 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.767829713 60.3974514979 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 211.090909091 118.986275619 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.1818181818 23.4991977007 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45454545455 5.21951772744 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456677635906 0.243740707755 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215681920541 0.0831039109588 260% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135987900712 0.0758088955206 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281340877014 0.150359130593 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136595634021 0.0667264976115 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 14.1392134831 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 12.1743820225 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.97 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.2143820225 171% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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