4. Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, many people choose to become vegetarian since a vegetarian diet is believed to be better for the human healthy. Although I agree that eating only vegetarian food will make our body become well. But sometimes this diet has some disadvantages with people who eat that every day.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why becoming used vegetable is beneficial. Firstly, science proved that the vegetarian has better healthy than people who are not vegetarian. They have lower risks of developing several chronic illnesses such as heart attack, diabetes some forms of cancer. This is due to the fact that a healthy vegetarian diet is a typically low fat and high fiber. Secondly, eating vegetables provide nutritious to support the human body. For example, banana is a great source of vitamin A, K, E as well as calcium. As a result, instead of eating many kinds of food to get this vitamin, we need to eating a banana.
On the other hand, there are several demerits which people must be pondered before vegetarian. Firstly, the vegetarian is not balance every day, he or she might suffer from a lack of calories to meet his or her energy. They will feel tired and they cannot do strong activities. Moreover, some nutrients might not be finding in vegetarian. It just is find in meat and fish. If people just be eating a vegetarian diet, they will be incomplete nutrients. Vegetarians use to West’s method in the cooking diet should change the way to processing food.
In conclusion, although healthy, a vegetarian diet is not for everyone and it requires care in the choice of foods and preparation of meals
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ved to be better for the human healthy. Although I agree that eating only vegetarian foo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8458781362 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6597204015 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594982078853 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9672007063 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.1111111111 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312840004627 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863024468356 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474317187262 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172717492348 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384483880397 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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