The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The pie charts compared the information about transaction of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five different countries in Europe.

It is clear that Switzerland which stood out as buying out far bananas in Europe. Overall, moderate increases can be witnessed in European coffee and bananas sales, with the exception of a slight decrease in Swedish and Danish bananas trading.

In two places, coffee sales increased by the same amount: 1,8-2 millions euros in Denmark, 0,8-1 millions euros in Sweden. In contrast, Swiss sales doubled from 3 to 6 millions euros. Moreover, a rocket can be seen in UK coffee transaction.

Switzerland dominated in bananas trading, with an exponential increase from 15 to 47 millions euros. However, Sweden and Denmark showed a different pattern, with drops in bananas sales from 1,8-1 millions euros and 2-0,9 millions euros respectively

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...d in European coffee and bananas sales, with the exception of a slight decrease in Swedish and Danish...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39007092199 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94137340047 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624113475177 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3809519311 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246157339241 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106620481031 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11909213355 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172714147525 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140117686615 0.0819641961636 171% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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