Universities should accept equal members of male and female students in every subject.
To what extend do you agree or disagree ?
There are certain consideration of factor which everyone can take into account to investigate and examine how university should admit equal numbers of male and female students in every lesson. i certainly believe that universities need to approve equal numbers each sex as a student. Someone can evidently weigh the pros and the cons of my each reasons. The reasons on which my stance is based are discussed in details below
First reason coming to ming to substantiate my stand point is concerned with this issue that to balance with two sexes teachs the students how important that equality of man and women in every respect. Cornerstone for societies is university which people can get knowledge and prepare themself to life. The best example that fit this notion is that my experiences from the university , studying with respectively less number of girls in the class was let me not to understant well enough about women right in depth. It goes without saying that interaction with more girls would be beneficial for my personality.
Another crucial reason which deserve some word here is that if the decision that accepts some size of students for each genders is taken by university might positively effect on female students, while they are searching to university after high school. A vivid example can be given to shed light on the subject is my sister experience. She applied the university which has well known about respectively near size of male and female students rather than other universities in Istanbul.
Having considered all the aforementioned grounds discussed above , i am of opinion that it is crystal clear two major factors which are the showing equality of genders to the students and increasing attraction of universitiy for women candidate. I strongly advocate my points owing to they are well enough convincing reasons for y approval. Hence , there is no doubt that i agree with the benefits of equal numbers of male and female
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, well, while, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07076923077 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72273679546 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572307692308 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3132567417 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.769230769 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211800713058 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794801304747 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729253239128 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1350676829 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483323260729 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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