The advantages and disadvantages of computers and TV for the mental development of children

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The advantages and disadvantages of computers and TV for the mental development of children.

It is seen that computers and TV are getting popular day by day. Social media is being used in every field in developed countries. Some people believe that computer and TV are berneficial for mental development of children while some people think that they are harmful for children. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of social media.

As far as advantages are concerned, social media has positive effects on children upbringing. One of reason is that computers and TV gives exposure to new technology and development . With one click someone can get a vast majority of info...

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Sentence: Thirdly, with the advent of social media , children are not participating in physical activities which is causing health issues like obesity and heart diseases.
Description: The fragment physical activities which is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace is with are

Sentence: Some people believe that computer and TV are berneficial for mental development of children while some people think that they are harmful for children.
Error: berneficial Suggestion: beneficial

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Avg. Sentence Length: 14.421 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.488 7.5

Need to develop your ideas. Don't just list them as first, second, third.

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