Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior. If sporting events cause antisocial behavior, can team sports really be good for us?
Team sports are very popular today compare to individual sports as they attract millions of supporters all over the world. Although sometimes supporters clashes with each other,team sports always good for every individual. In this essay I will discuss about benefits of team sports with examples.
Firstly, team sports teach us essential skills like team work, team spirit and unity. For supporters it is not only a medium of entertainment but they virtually feel that they are a part of team. For instance, millions of viewer watch football premier league matches live as well as on TVs and act like they are also players of the team. Such influence of team sports generates many positive changes in everyone's life.
Secondly, compare to individual sports, team sports are always competitive, so people thoroughly enjoy every moment of a match. Such sports help different countries to exchange culture values and traditions. Even it can help to reduce political tension between two countries. For example, even though India and Pakistan are war affected countries, when their national team play cricket match together, citizens of both nations enjoy such matches and forget political tension. Therefore, team sports play critical role to represent nation's feeling on world's map.
In conclusion, team sports not only help every individual player who is a part of team but also help supporters to come out of tension and enjoy every moment of match.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , team
...times supporters clashes with each other,team sports always good for every individual...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56076706128 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594017094017 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.325123152709 308% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2444643479 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1538461538 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26206985005 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110969263076 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481564818264 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175572947047 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401605936439 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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