People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
Many people argued that foreigner should follow the customs and traditios when they start to live in a new country. Personally, I completely agree with this opinion.
On the one hand, not following the the local tradition may have some drawbacks. Firstly, in some countries, it is illegal if foreigners do not follow the host country's customs. For instance, if Vietnamese comes to Singapore and throw litter in the public areas, they will be given a fire while in Vietnam, they can leave rabbish everywhere without being punished. Secondly, do not follow local traditions makes people have loads of difficulties to socialize with origin residents. For example, if foreigners want to opend a restaurant in a new country, they must follow the eating habits and eating manners of the local.
On the other hand, follow the local's traditions has many benefits. The firs benefit is that the residents will accept the new one so that they will have an easier life there and can make more friends. The second benefit is that when following the new traditions, they will have chances to experience different life and understand more about daily life of other contries in the world. It is the most value experiences that they can have if only they adapt to new environment.
In conclusion, I believe that the new residents should follow the local's traditions and customs when moving into a new environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...pinion. On the one hand, not following the the local tradition may have some drawbacks...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...pinion. On the one hand, not following the the local tradition may have some drawbacks...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95744680851 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65210525633 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536170212766 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5438719852 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0833333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287349998038 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119745900157 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121239062507 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227814405896 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11916000255 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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