Higher education can be funded by several ways such as the following :
1. All cost paid by the government
2. All cost paid by the student
3. All cost paid by the government loan which students have to pay back after graduation
Please discuss both of the advantages and disadvantages of all these three theories above and decide which the best is.
In this era, education is very important for world society. A few people think that fee of education, especially higher education, should pay by several institution, there are government, students, or mix between government and student.
All necessary fill by the government would make every people are able to get high education because society no need to spend their money to enter the university, and they can get lesson with free. However, that would built parents lazy to have good work to pay their children’s education because every children have right to have education, so they no need to effort to enter the university.
All necessary fill by students create people become struggler people because people who really want to study would hard work to get money for school. Neverthless, not all of individual have money to follow class in university, and that make society in a country have enough knowledge to face the world globalization.
All necessary fill by the government, but the students have to turn back the government money after they graduate from college is having benefit because society could enter the college while they collect their money to get information in the institute. Moreover, that is not to have function because if people still do not have money to change the government money, they possible to graduate lately for collecting money. That obtain to decrease image of people even they are smart and have several abilities.
To sum up, three methods to create community in a country has enough education, there are the fee by the government, there are the fee by the students, and there are the fee by the government, but the students must change after they graduate from the college. Everyway has advantage and disadvantage.
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Sentence: However, that would built parents lazy to have good work to pay their children's education because every children have right to have education, so they no need to effort to enter the university.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to would and built
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an article
Suggestion: Refer to they and no
Sentence: Moreover, that is not to have function because if people still do not have money to change the government money, they possible to graduate lately for collecting money.
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Suggestion: Refer to they and possible
Sentence: That obtain to decrease image of people even they are smart and have several abilities.
Description: The fragment That obtain to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace obtain with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: All necessary fill by students create people become struggler people because people who really want to study would hard work to get money for school.
Error: struggler Suggestion: No alternate word
The following 3 sentences have grammatical issues, you may re-write them:
All necessary fill by the government would make every people are able to get high education because society no need to spend their money to enter the university, and they can get lesson with free.
All necessary fill by students create people become struggler people because people who really want to study would hard work to get money for school. Neverthless...
All necessary fill by the government, but the students have to turn back the government money after they graduate from college is having benefit because society could enter the college while they collect their money to get information in the institute.
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