Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There has always been debate about subject of imparting moral values into youngsters is primary role of their guardians or academic institutions. This essay will analyze this issue and conclude with opinion.
Parents have duty towards grooming their wards to better citizen of the country. They are primary role models and closest friends to their offspring. Children look unto them before taking important decisions. So, each action taken by parents form sense of judgement in minds of children. In addition, their progress is monitored by caretaker to ensure that they don't fall prey to bad habits such as smoking, drug abuse or bad company. Indeed, it can be suggested that amount of quality time spent by elders with their child go a long way in forming good habits.
Nevertheless, it does not mean that role of school is less important in letting our young adults to become pillar of society. These centers form primary source of learning and their curriculum includes courses of science and history. School goers learn about great leaders of past, present and develop habit of critical thinking and research. Children spent most of their days in school where they pass number of exams, make assignments, undergo group study, give presentations.Furthermore, they also gain qualities such as patience, discipline, tolerance, hard work which naturally lends towards making them leaders of tomorrow.
To sum up, it would not be wrong to suggest that only combined effort of both parents and school can help children becoming essential part of society.
- Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives others think that adult life brings more happiness,in spite of greater responsibilities.Discuss both these views and give your opinion 70
- Being a celebrity such as famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems 75
- With all the troubles in work today, money spent on space explorations is complete waste. Money could be spent on other things. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 63
- Some people feel that entertainers are paid too much money Do you agree or disagree Which other type of job should be highly paid 74
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 75
Comments
Thanks for checking my essay.
Thanks for checking my essay. I have corrected introduction and added few more point to increase word count. please re-check it.
flaws: No. of
flaws:
No. of Words: 253 350
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.054 0.07
More words wanted to get higher marks.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 253 350
No. of Characters: 1275 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.988 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.04 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.384 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.462 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.932 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.299 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.526 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.054 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Thanks for checking again and
Thanks for checking again and pointing out my mistakes.
Sentence: There has always been debate about subject of imparting moral values into youngsters is primary role of their guardians or onus lies with academic institutions.
Description: two verbs in one sentence
flaws:
No. of Words: 220 350
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 220 350
No. of Characters: 1114 1500
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.851 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.064 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.35 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 88 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 66 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.433 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.304 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.547 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.047 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5