Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news. Do you argee or disagree?
Nowadays, using the Internet to access information is becoming more popular than ever. However, some people think that newspaper will still the main source of news. Personally, I completely disagree with this point of view.
There are many reasons why newspaper will not remain the major source of information anymore. The first reason is that the Internet is now a more convenient way to access information. When going online, people can reach different sources of information about various areas in different countries in the world. So that they can get variety of information instead of receiving only one source of information from one newspaper. In addition, surfing the web saves a lot of time, money and energy of people in the modern world. With a smartphone that everyone has at least one today, people can read the news everywhere at anytime they want. This is a better way to get information in compare with going to the post office to buy a newspaper, which costs a lot of time and energy.
The second reason is that the Internet provides news in a more attractive and quicker way than the newspaper does. People can get information from the Internet in different ways, such as reading news, watching videos or seeing images. Whereas, they must to read news in the newspaper to get information, which is a more boring way. The Internet can also provide the lastest news to people immediately. For example, live stream function of Facebook allows everyone to watch and hear directly anythings happening at that time in any places. With newspapers, people need to wait at least one day to know what happened.
In conclusion, although reading newspaper is a good way to access information, I believe that it will not be a major source of news in modern life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...as in different countries in the world. So that they can get variety of information ins...
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Line 2, column 493, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eb saves a lot of time, money and energy of people in the modern world. With a sm...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... videos or seeing images. Whereas, they must to read news in the newspaper to get infor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, still, whereas, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8642384106 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66798869507 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513245033113 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9702937695 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.4117647059 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340817644025 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117819078117 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868699813236 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238326007103 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047229815334 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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