People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today, education plays an important role in our life, that’s why the people enter the college. Many students attend university or college for many different reasons for examples, increased knowledge, new experience and career preparation.
First of all, after the student finished his studying in high school, he wants to attend the college in order to be a professional in his unique department, so he becomes inquisitive to earn all the information about it. The college offers the students with a very professional teachers and all required service that help them to gain a very and a huge amount of information. For example, Civil engineer department, university provides the students with all requirements to teach them the basic program for designing such as sap, etabs and others. In addition it provides a lab for making experiments about getting the strength of concrete.
Second, in the view of some students, attending a college is a new experience with respect to them. Since it’s first time to them for living in the dorm or apartment away from their parent’s house, so it’s a new exciting experience that allow them to know a people from different language and culture, and it’s chance to know a new language and build up a friendships. Also that way helps the people to depend on their-self rather than depending on their parents, so that experience courage and help them to face all the difficulties of the life either in present or in the future.
Finally, the basic and the important thing that allow anyone to get a job with a high salary is the qualification of the person that depends on his college certificates. So attend a college is the one of the basic for prepare the students for his future career. As you have a good qualification, with high level of education, as the chance to hires in a good position in a big company with a high salary will increase.
To conclude, attending a college is very beneficial, since day after day the world become more advanced, which required intelligent generation to continue that way. It’s the only way to have a shine future.
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Sentence: Since it's first time to them for living in the dorm or apartment away from their parent's house, so it's a new exciting experience that allow them to know a people from different language and culture, and it's chance to know a new language and build up a friendships.
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Sentence: So attend a college is the one of the basic for prepare the students for his future career.
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