the graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. the pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home
The charts below compare consumption of England in terms of amounts of energy and the sectors which are utilizing it as a need.
It is clear that winters have by far the highest demand of energy and it hits the peak between 9 p.m. and 11 p.m.. It is also noticeable that the maximum amounts of energy are consumed for heating the rooms and waters.
In the graph, it is indicated that the least scale for consuming energy is in the summer at the middle of day, when all workers go to work and children have been taken to the schools(about 12000 units of electricity). While this amount will rise between 13 and 14 o'clock, the units will fall in sunset hours. In front, there is winter with a slight difference in maximum units as it will reach the top approximately in 10 a.m..
In the other comparison, it is shown that lighting, TV and radio are using energy as same as Vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electric tools in every English house with 15 percent of the whole energy. With a few distinct,2.5% more, electricity is used for ovens, kettles, washing machines. The most energy-consuming group comprises the equipment for heating places and water.
To recap, it is adequate to say that heaters could be counted as the majority of electricity consumers.
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The charts below compare consumption of England in terms of amounts of energy and the sectors which are utilizing it as a need.
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