the environment problem facing today's world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Government and large companies should responsible for the deducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is an alarming issue that environmental degradation has become more severe. While the government and large enterprises should take their responsibilites for reducing the damage, I believe that individuals should also aid to ameliorate the situation.
On the one hand, the government and companies should place a high priority on alleviating environment problems. From the government’s perspective, they can implement environmentally-friendly rules and regulations to deduce contamination. For example, by imposing a financial burden on commuters and fostering public transports usages, the volume of traffic would decline, meaning that exhaust fumes which play a vital role in global warming would significantly diminish. Similarly, large companies should counteract environmental destruction due to their adverse impacts on air, water and land qualities. Instead of consuming fossil fuel resulting in polluted emission, chemical pesticides leading to destroy the ecological balance, they should invest in alternative energy sources and organic products. Not only these actions will ease the destruction but they also help to achieve a sustainable development.
On the other hand, individuals also can reduce the negative effects on the environment. They can join one of the organizations which form part of the green movement, in order to campaign for people awareness’ changes. For instance, residents should abide by the rules of pollution reduction such as no smoking at public places. Additionally, customers are encouraged to replace nylon material on reusable one in packages. This will slash the vast amount of waste which would not be disintegrated after years.
In conclusion, it is true that the government and large companies should take draconian measures to damage deduction; however, I opine that law-abiding citizens can also have a huge influence on environment protection.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-05-04 | prasanna532 | 67 | view |
| 2018-05-04 | prasanna532 | 73 | view |
| 2018-05-06 | Netra patel | 39 | view |
| 2018-05-04 | prasanna532 | 73 | view |
- The graph below shows the percentage of population in cities since 1970s with projection to 2030 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant 87
- Some people think that computers and the internet are more important for a child s education than going to school But others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn effectively Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- writing task 1 11
- More and more people work from home and study from home with the development of computer technology DO you think it is positive or negative development 92
- the environment problem facing today's world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Government and large companies should responsible for the deducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ge influence on environment protection.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81785714286 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42603887119 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646428571429 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9973447844 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24774034396 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762301043975 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562806434161 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147957831907 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112866019389 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.