The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
Each individual in society would judge and determine what others do in their job. Certainly, what to expect in society is if people are doing their job fairly superior with efficient way, society will praise these people as greatness of all time. During this moment, contemporary people will be influenced by those greatness of individual and they respect what they did in the society. Policy would be the matter of people judging their politician, music is the matter how people react with rejuvenation, and inspirational person such as Martin Luther King Jr. who was going outside of boundary can be acclaimed by people who lived in the same era.
First of all, policy maker is usually come from people’s demand and if politician would not follow or respect the way that people want, or if politician did not consolidate with people who disagree with his policy, then this politician could not be called as greatness of individual; indeed the greatness of individual is the leadership, and conciliation for politician. By not having leadership, politician has specks from his career and reputation. Further, if politician doesn’t have conciliation, then especially democratic nation cannot retain what objectivity of itself.
Additionally, art in general could be called the greatness of individual from aftermath of an artist. However, recent articles show that musician has more influential individual from contemporary era. Artist such as Beyonce, she released the album about racism and some of judges do not like the value maybe because it is controversial, but in public whenever we listened what she is telling through her music, people have applauded how she become better and better.
Finally, people who went against unfair laws or rules during 1960s were used to be called the most valuable and greatness of individual. For example, Martin Luther King who had such eloquent voice and was telling about how the laws were flawed. Eventually, he made a speech about “I have a dream,” which made a historical value of John F. Kennedy made a bill of Civil Right Act and Vote Right Act. It was very sad that Martin Luther King Jr. and John F. Kennedy were assassinated by southern zealot, but they have been called as greatness of individual.
In conclusion, history would remember forever, but that does not mean that greatness of individual would not be noticed by contemporaries. Those three are most likely influential to all people and helpful to increase the value of society. Therefore, the greatness of individual is determined by contemporaries.
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- The effectiveness of a country’s leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country’s citizens. 66
- Scientist and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasonin 50
- Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image. 62
- Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws. 50
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this greatness' or 'those greatnesses'?
Suggestion: this greatness; those greatnesses
...ntemporary people will be influenced by those greatness of individual and they respect what the...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the judges') or simply say ''some judges''.
Suggestion: some of the judges; some judges
...she released the album about racism and some of judges do not like the value maybe because it ...
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Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'during the 1960s'.
Suggestion: during the 1960s
...e who went against unfair laws or rules during 1960s were used to be called the most valuabl...
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Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...made a speech about 'I have a dream,' which made a historical value of John ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in general, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21052631579 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89376392365 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50956937799 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.7740576692 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.631578947 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221751324588 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731801368985 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704017549713 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130208676739 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727387779787 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.