The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The first table below shows the total number of visits overseas by UK residents in the year 1994 to 1998. It shows that UK residents goes abroad for holiday, business trips, to visit family and friends and other reasons.
A highest total of UK residents, who went overseas were recorded in the year 1998 (with a total of 28,828). It shows that reason of travel is to go on a holiday with family and friends.
The second graph chart shows the destination that UK resident commonly visited. Most of the residents went to travel to Western Europe. Some went to other parts of the world. A few portion travelled to North America.
Overall, there is a total of 28,828 English tourist who travelled overseas in the year 1998. A large volume of tourist went to explore the cities of Western Europe for holiday. A lowest number of tourist were recorded in the year 1995 having a total of 21,610. North America is the least visited destination of UK resident.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: The
...amily and friends and other reasons. A highest total of UK residents, who went...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun portion seems to be countable; consider using: 'few portions'.
Suggestion: few portions
...ome went to other parts of the world. A few portion travelled to North America. Overall,...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: The
...e cities of Western Europe for holiday. A lowest number of tourist were recorded ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66863905325 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36422930292 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508875739645 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7270356813 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.75 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.0833333333 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147135898397 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630466867391 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551732853332 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998695270803 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470746501009 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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