Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but other people claim that it is the individual's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that healthcare and education should be paid by the government or the individual. I, however, believe that basic healthcare and primary education should be paid by the government while advanced healthcare and higher education should be borne by individuals.
On the one hand, it is the government’s responsibility that makes basic healthcare and primary education accessible to the public. The nation’s prosperity depends considerably on their well-educated society who might be treated by good health services. Additionally, we all pay taxes so we are entitled to get something back in return. While private schools and special healthcare treatment are always available to those who can afford them, public schools and basic healthcare system are needed to everyone in the community, especially the deprived people. It should be a government priority that those who live below a poverty line need to be provided free healthcare, consequently, nobody dies for want of treatment. Moreover, the government should subsidize for the higher education of meritorious students, brilliant state workers pursuing further knowledge to contribute to their home country’s development.
On the other hand, individuals should be responsible for their advanced healthcare and higher education. Actually, advanced medical and surgical treatments are expensive; therefore, instead of being governed by the government, individuals should take some health insurance or save in any other way with the tomorrow in mind. Similarly, private schools and higher education benefit individual more than the nation. Due to the fact that international schools and studying abroad supply students with a variety of useful skills in order to adapt in the global environment and to become well-rounded citizens. As a result, it is likely more reasonable when these costs are shouldered by the individuals.
In conclusion, while the government should allocate their resources of basic healthcare treatment and primary education to the majority of the society, the individuals should pay for their advanced healthcare system and further education by themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, however, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71118012422 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19419109589 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524844720497 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1610351237 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.357142857 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163028540249 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667443074915 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523732030831 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113035583368 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02540172232 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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