eople behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave?
Behavior, in the most of cases, does not depend of clothes. People who have a bad mood or some psychological problem can be affected with it. The ways in which people dressed are chosen by them, so it should not affect them behavior.
In many cases, psychological disease can change the behavior of people that have that problem. Overmore, it can affect other characteristic of them, like mood. Due to, they are not sane people. In addition, they can be affected by the way like other people are dressed. Obviously, they would receive some professional help. For example: I have a friend who has that problem. He turn very aggressive and changes completely his mood when he see one person with red clothes. For this reason, I recommended to him to go a specialist for his diseases.
Moreover, everybody has the freedom to choose which clothes to use. Furthermore, they can use it in the moment when they want to. Consequently, they should not change their behavior. In fact, others people must accept the way in which others dressed. For instance I like to use short all the time. One day, I was at the mall with my girlfriend because we went to eat. A guy does not like my girlfriend way to dress, so I had a big problem with him.
To sum up I disagree with this point. Clothes should not change the mood or the behavior of others. A individual who chooses their own dress should not change mood for that reason. If someone has been affected by this problem, he or she should go to a doctor for medical care.
- You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:• 78
- Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings, but many of them lead unhappy lives. Do you agree?To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous? 67
- eople behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? 60
- THE TIME WE SPEND IN COLLEGE IS THE BEST OF A PERSON'S LIFE. 60
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the cases') or simply say ''most cases''.
Suggestion: most of the cases; most cases
Behavior, in the most of cases, does not depend of clothes. People who...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'turns'.
Suggestion: turns
... have a friend who has that problem. He turn very aggressive and changes completely ...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sees'.
Suggestion: sees
...and changes completely his mood when he see one person with red clothes. For this r...
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Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...im to go a specialist for his diseases. Moreover, everybody has the freedom to c...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...es to use. Furthermore, they can use it in the moment when they want to. Consequently, they s...
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Line 8, column 101, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...nge the mood or the behavior of others. A individual who chooses their own dress ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, by the way, in many cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55839416058 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5591541714 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518248175182 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.7450377187 48.9658058833 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.7727272727 100.406767564 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4545454545 20.6045352989 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992101875792 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335689281984 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318474880301 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066064600303 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309657488257 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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