To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
With the development of human society, cities have become a hub for economy, politics and culture. Studying major cities is imperative for us to understand a society. However, that is not the whole story. We should always bear in mind it is in the countryside that most civilization originated, the study of which can absolutely be a valuable perspective in understanding a society.
Foremost, cities are name cards of a society. By studying the many aspect of people's city life, we can attain a wealth of information regarding to a particular society. Needless to say, the life of city residents reflect the economic might of a society, especially in developed countries. Cities are typically centers for innovation and scientific research, so achievements made in cities can realiably indicate the latest progress made. In addition, many cities also stand out as a place for fine arts, where the exhibitions and galleries are the best one can find. Take New York city as an example. Everyday millions of tourists from all over the world visit the metropolitan in the U.S.. Walking on the streets of New York, people can easily discern the characteristics of U.S. society, like its openess and diversity.
In addition, the development of cities provide a record of the development of society. It is well-acknowledged that cities are the fruit of Industrial Revolutions. Therefore, by studying the birth and growth of cities, one can track the progress of population migration, economic growth, industrialization and the concomitant change in people's thoughts, beliefs and attitudes. These stories are indispensible in understanding the modern history, and studing cities become even more valuable with this historic perspective.
Nonetheless, cities do not present the whole picture of a society. For less developed countries, people's living in the countryside may better represent the general standard of living. What is more, many traditional art and customs are hardly preserved in cities for multifarious reasons, but they can still be observed in rural areas. Villages are a historic book of a society, which also provides much information necessary for understanding a society.
In conclusion, cities and villages present diaparate aspects of a society, and studying one of the two alone can only lead to biased conclusions. In more developed socities, it might make sense to focusing on major cities, while in poorer societies villages and countrysides are definitely more informatics. Importantly, in any society, both cities and villages are a inseperable part of society, thus cannot be negated when studing a society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...ame cards of a society. By studying the many aspect of peoples city life, we can attain a w...
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Line 3, column 689, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... world visit the metropolitan in the U.S.. Walking on the streets of New York, peo...
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Line 9, column 367, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y society, both cities and villages are a inseperable part of society, thus canno...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nonetheless, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2227.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36626506024 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15901133127 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530120481928 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7287984013 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8260869565 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0434782609 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82608695652 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150598441356 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507761321808 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450014491669 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102978707985 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438558857708 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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