This pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The pictures highlight the process by which tomato ketchup is produced and packed in order to be sold to customers.
It is noticed that there are 15 stages in the diagram, starting with harvesting tomatoes and finishing with using tomato ketchup as a flavor with some dishes at home.
The first step is that tomatoes are picked and the put in baskets. After that, they are divided into 2 groups: good and bad tomatoes so that tomato ketchup can get a high quality as possible. Good tomatoes are continuously delivered to factories, where they are removed some unnecessary parts, included removing stalks, skin, seeds. Having been stored in a container, tomatoes are crushed to become liquid. At this point, sugar, salt, vinegar are added. The next step is that the liquid is boiled and then left about 2 hours in order to get a right temperature.
After steps making tomatoes ketchup, it is poured into bottles, which are then labeled. Before being packed into boxes, the bottles are checked quality. Following this, these boxes are loaded onto lorries, which take them to supermarkets. The final step is that you buy a bottle of tomatoes ketchup and enjoy with hamburger and fries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90049751244 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43179275425 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2122801921 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0833333333 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 5.23603664747 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166928059119 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613929740618 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384623085636 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107216541408 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169437505438 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.